January 2007 Archives
David Hewson in Rome revisits the locations used in the third Nic Costa novel, The Sacred Cut, and in particular the Pantheon, the former Imperial era temple that's at the heart of the story.
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Energy executive Lynn Dayton thinks her challenge is fixing the troubled refinery her company has just acquired on the Houston Ship Channel. But soon she must save it, and other oil refineries, from the industrial havoc and deaths directed by a French saboteur, simultaneously fighting off threats to her own life.
ITW associate member L.A. Starks' first novel reflects a career that has taken her from oil industry refineries to corporate offices. To watch her new video on her debut novel see below.
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International bestselling author and ITW member Kate Pepper reads the chilling prologue from her thriller ONE COLD NIGHT (NAL/Penguin, 2006) in which a predator watches his next victim, fourteen-year-old Lisa Bailey, on her way to school in Brooklyn. Kate 's next novel, HERE SHE LIES , cranks up the suspense as identical twin sisters face identity theft without knowing exactly who to trust and who to fear-Listen for chapter one in spring 2007!
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Colin Cotterill takes us on a trip to the People's
Democratic Republic of Laos where his Dr. Siri Paiboun mysteries are
set. We hear a National Public Radio interview talking about the first
of these books, The Coroner's Lunch. We then accompany him to
the wilds of Laos where we hear some samples of his interviews with
locals as he researches the second and third books: Thirty Three Teeth and Disco for the Departed
(the latter is due out in August 2005). This travelogue is rounded off
with a reading from the fourth book, The Corpses of Khong.
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The first Nic Costa story created quite a stir for David Hewson
appeared, notably for its shocking opening in the Vatican Library. Here
are three extracts from the book read by the British actor Andrew Piper.
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One Christmas Eve, Whale Harbor is visited by a man who thinks he's
Jesus and claims to be looking for a game of poker. But, as usual,
things are not quite what they seem. Having some version of the Lord in
town for his birthday creates a strange effect on the locals: unlikely
couples are breaking up and making up and making out; a luxury mobile
home that belonged to an elderly couple from New Jersey (until they
disappeared after a run-in with "the Lord") is won by a
down-on-his-luck gambler in an unbelievable hand of poker; the area's
most well-known and long-forgotten tourist attraction is rising up from
a hole in the ground; and a gun no one has used in years is suddenly in
hot demand. In the steamy climes of southern Florida, you take your
miracles where you can get them-and if that means being led to
salvation by a schizophrenic with a rap sheet, so be it.
In the rollicking tradition of Carl Hiaasen's Tourist Season, with the heart of Garrison Keillor's Lake Wobegon, and peopled by the kind of colorful characters who would be quite at home in any Tom Robbins novel, N. M. Kelby's Whale Season is a sharp and funny novel made up of equal parts comic adventure and serial-killer inspired mayhem. Listen to the author's reading.
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Allan
Topol
"I quit writing," the would-be novelist said, "when
I realized that the headlines in the newspapers heralded stories more
bizarre than I could ever create in my mind."
Welcome to the minefield which is the attempt to write a thriller having
as a background a current and critical international political issue.
The objective is to have the readers turn the pages, hopefully long
into the night.
Some time ago, I concluded that fiction can be an effective vehicle
to address a serious subject, as well as an entertainment. While a novel
is ultimately about people, the story can be educational and deal with
the serious international political issues with which the author is
concerned. Some novelists such as Graham Greene and Leon Uris did that
very effectively.
For example, Greene's novel, THE HONORARY CONSUL, which was number
one on bestseller lists for many weeks, provided an incisive view of
the brutal military dictatorship in Paraguay. In THE COMEDIANS, the
backdrop was repression in Haiti. THE HEART OF THE MATTER provided a
view of life in European colonies in Africa during the Second World
War.
Likewise, Leon Uris's bestselling novels EXODUS and QB VII educated
millions of readers about the founding of the State of Israel and the
Holocaust. But Uris by no means confined himself to the "Jewish
issues." TOPAZ dealt with Castro's Cuba. From his superb
novel, TRINITY, I learned much of what I know about the conflict in
Northern Ireland.
Neither Greene nor Uris would be classified as thriller writers, though
some of their fiction has elements of this genre. But Ken Follet certainly
would. His novel TRIPLE focuses on Israeli efforts to obtain material
for nuclear weapons. In THE KEY TO REBECCA, the setting is Egypt during
a critical period in the Second World War as Rommel's army tore
east.
For those who wish to try this type of thriller, there are two key points.
The first is to find a sufficiently important issue and one which will
impact the American people. With the end of the Cold War and the USSR,
this takes some creative thinking, although there is no paucity of issues
and not just in the Middle East. John Le Carre focuses on Panama in
THE TAILOR OF PANAMA. Militarism is on the rise in Japan. China may
attempt to seize Taiwan by force.
Subscribe to the ECONOMIST and let your mind wander. You'll find
that issue. People often ask me whether the story comes first or the
issue. The answer is they usually hit my mind at about the same time.
Research is essential. Visiting all the places described is invaluable.
The factual predicates must be correct. Regardless of the issue, many
readers will be knowledgeable.
Prayer is useful if you're so inclined. Pray that changing world
events don't blow away your story. I was all ready to go with
one about the Shah of Iran when he was overthrown.
This brings me to the second point. At the end of the day, a thriller
must have a story and characters that will make the reader want to continue
turning the pages. Having an issue is great, but too much of a good
thing kills. Becoming bogged down in the factual background can destroy
a thriller.
It's a fine line to walk. Very satisfying, however, when it works.
© 2005 Allan Topol
A graduate of Carnegie Tech, majoring in chemistry, Allan
Topol abandoned science and obtained a law degree from Yale. A partner
in a major Washington law firm, he practices international environmental
law. An avid wine connector, he has traveled extensively, researching
dramatic locations for his best-selling novels , which include SPY DANCE,
DARK AMBITION, CONSPIRACY, and ENEMY OF MY ENEMY.
Christopher Rice
Here's what I like most about writing crime fiction: Every five
seconds there is a large and well-attended convention taking place somewhere
in the United States where fans and practitioners of the craft gather
to discuss the most successful ways in which they can murder their imaginary
friends.
The largest of these conventions is called Bouchercon. It's basically
three days spent shuffling between hotel conference rooms with a bag
of free books slung over your shoulder, three days of flipping through
the convention program in search of the bios for authors whose sharp
wit livened up panels with topics like "The Role of the Potted
Plant in the Police Procedural" and "The State of the Cat
Mystery In The Wake of 9/11." (Don't get me wrong. It's a blast.
You're free to talk about things here that might land you on a watch
list if discussed in an airport, or even a nice restaurant.)
This past fall, Bouchercon was also the setting for what many in the
crime-writing community regarded as a mild insurrection. The invitation
went out by email several months prior to the convention; those attendees
who considered themselves to be thriller writers were invited to gather
in an abandoned conference room several hours before the start of the
Anthony Awards dinner. The goal ‹ to determine whether a separate
organization was needed to promote and celebrate the thriller as a distinct
genre. Distinct, that is, from the mystery. (Insert gasp here.)
A quick check of Bouchercon's website will tell you that it's a mystery
convention. Thriller writers meeting at a mystery convention? For devoted
crime fiction fans, the mere idea of such a meeting gives off a small
spark of controversy. It conjures images of a group of glamorously dressed,
brandy-snifting novelists drawing up plans to kidnap and ransom the
President of the Mystery Writers of America and stage armed takeovers
of mystery bookstores throughout the country. ("All the Frederick
Forsyth to the window display! Now, Otto!")
Rest assured that such silly rumors were merely the inane ramblings
of certain convention center staff members who have since moved on to
other lines of work. (Note to concerned family members ‹ Gayle
Lynds has asked that all inquiries into the whereabouts of these individuals
be addressed to Lee Child, newly appointed chairman of ITW's Disappearing
Committee.)
Joking aside, the ever-widening circle of thriller writers who gathered
that evening shared the belief that their work was profoundly connected
to the traditional mystery, but also its own beast, deserving of its
own corner of the barn. While the mystery and thriller share certain
thematic elements, the all-too-common consensus is that a thriller simply
rockets them all to level ten.
This mode of comparison allows for few shades of gray. Try to use it
to assess which side of the fence a work of crime fiction should sit
on, and the resulting discussion may turn into a hair-splitting dissection
of the novel's more cosmetic attributes. Lots of explosions? It's a
thriller. One explosion where no one dies? A mystery ... maybe. Wait,
a cat is killed in the explosion? Oh, dear! Definitely a thriller then.
Killing cats in mysteries is a big no-no. Especially since they make
such fine detectives. And so on and so on.
I'm not a fan of "the high-stakes" method of distinguishing
thrillers from mysteries. This might have something to do with the fact
that I consider my first two novels to be thrillers but critics don't
seem to agree. In my first, A DENSITY OF SOULS, homophobic terrorists
bomb a New Orleans gay bar, and a massive hurricane destroys southern
Louisiana. Call it really bad luck for New Orleans, but don't call it
a "coming-of-age story" for Pete's sake. Unfortunately that's
exactly how most critics described it.
In my second attempt to write a thriller, a college freshman with an
assumed identity tries to investigate a murder. Only problem is the
victim was married to the professor this freshman is having an affair
with. And ‹ oh, yeah ‹ his fake identity is starting to
unravel. Some critics described this ditty as a "dark coming-of-age
story."
I'm convinced that if I wrote a novel about a massive blizzard that
sent sheets of ice scissoring through downtown Los Angeles critics would
describe it as "meteorological meditation." I don't know.
Maybe my characters talk too much. Maybe I need to use more Semtex.
Perhaps the cover art is a little too stark, a little too literary,
if you will. (Most people thought the dead grass depicted on the cover
of THE SNOW GARDEN was a close-up shot of arm hair)
So here's the real question. Why do I remain convinced that my novels
are thrillers when the majority of critics refuse to describe them as
such?
Simple. My characters always leave behind a trail of physical and psychological
destruction that is ripe for the prodding of a good detective. Upon
finishing THE SNOW GARDEN, I immediately wanted to follow it up with
my best attempt at a mystery, in which a seasoned detective made a new
kind of sense out of the proceedings, the kind of sense that the characters
in THE SNOW GARDEN were too desperate and afraid to make for themselves.
Call it a ghost mystery, if you will, that will continue to linger out
there in the ether until I write it. (I might not.)
Conversely, I think every great mystery reads as if it were preceded
by a ghost thriller. My favorite example is THE GALTON CASE, by Ross
Macdonald, in which PI Lew Archer uncovers a conspiracy of switched
identities that spans decades and straddles North America. I don't consider
the novel a thriller because Archer never gets sucked in by the sense
of desperation among the suspects and villains he encounters, a brave
strength that gives him the ability to experience a different story
inspired by the same crimes.
To put it simply, every great thriller kicks up the makings of a great
mystery, and every great mystery begins in the wreckage of a great thriller.
But both rely on the well-conceived conspiracy or crime.
From a creative standpoint, I like to think of the perfect crime as
a beautiful seductress. (Alright, that's a lie. I think of my crime
as a hot stud. But for the sake of example, I'll let the majority rule
here.) I send her into a smoky bar and have one guy approach her right
away. He falls for her after the first drink. He takes her home and
into bed. He makes ill-advised life plans with her. If I pick this poor
dupe's story, I'm about to start a thriller.
I let another night go by in this new-noir bar in my mind. In walks
my dangerous dame for the second time that week. I have another guy
approach her, only this guy doesn't quite like her tone. He buys her
a few more drinks to see if things lighten up. They don't. He begs off,
but later, he follows her home just so he can get a glimpse of how she
lives. If I pick this guy's story, I'm about to start writing a mystery.
Readers will be able to tell right away which guy's story they're reading,
without counting the number of explosions involved or how many times
the guy flew British Airways in the course of the novel.
For reasons best left unexplored, I always pick the poor dupe who made
too many life plans with the dangerous dame. That makes me a thriller
writer. Someday I might learn to keep my distance or try a different
angle of approach, but for now I'll just keep hitting those crime conventions
and take solace in the fact that mystery and thriller writers both get
worked over by the same dangerous dame. The difference is our scars
are in different places.
© 2005 Christopher Rice
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Christopher
Rice is the author of THE NEW YORK TIMES best selling "thrillers"
A DENSITY OF SOULS and THE SNOW GARDEN, which won a Lambda Literary
Award. He writes a regular column for THE ADVOCATE. His forthcoming
novel, LIGHT BEFORE DAY, will be in stores on March 16, 2005.
Katherine Neville
Fifteen years
ago I wrote a book called THE EIGHT. It is the story of a 200-year quest
for a jeweled chess set containing a secret of mysterious power that
almost destroyed Charlemagne. Though THE EIGHT is now called a cult
classic, the real mystery is how it ever got published in the first
place, because no one, including reviewers and publishers, could begin
to describe it when it first came out.
Part historical, part modern, part puzzle novel, and part swashbuckling
adventure story, THE EIGHT mingles mystery, fantasy, romance, science,
and science fiction, and continues to remain a book that defies easy
categorization. Over the years I have been compared to Alexandre Dumas,
Umberto Eco, and even Stephen Spielberg.
I'm credited by some with inventing a new genre, but actually it was
invented by Scheherazade. It seems to me, though, that this sense of
uniqueness is probably the biggest reason for THE EIGHT's success and
endurance ‹ it has sold millions of copies and is still in print
in 22 countries. Recently the book rebounded onto world bestseller lists
‹ in some nations for the second or third time. It will soon be
translated into 5 more languages ‹ Dutch, Russian, Greek, Norwegian,
and Thai.
Though it wasn't the first book I wrote, THE EIGHT was my first published
novel. When Ballantine bought it in 1988 along with A CALCULATED RISK,
THE EIGHT was only half-finished. Ballantine planned it to be the first
hardback fiction they had ever published, but because it was impossible
to compare with other books, they knew they had to be creative about
pulling together an audience who read a variety of genres. Everything
from jacket design to marketing and distribution was very hands-on,
a family operation.
When the time came for me to deliver the final pages, I told Robert
Byron Wyatt, Ballantine's Editor-in-Chief, that he could choose from
three possible endings revealing what becomes of the chess pieces. To
everyone's surprise, Bob (not a big mystery buff) chose the one that
opened the door to a sequel.
As far as I was concerned, however, the story was over. The secret
of the fabulous fictional Montglane chess set had been revealed. FINIS.
It was not until five years after the book was published that the idea
for the sequel hit me over the head ‹ literally. While in Switzerland
doing research at Carl Jung's Eranos Center, I took a wrong turn down
the darkened corridor of a local restaurant and fell headfirst down
a flight of stairs. I was a wreck of contusions and bruises.
The next day brought a 16-hour train ride to Prague, where I had to
keep pacing the length of the train to prevent my body from getting
any stiffer. That's when and how I conceived the sequel to THE EIGHT
and what will happen to the characters and the chess pieces more than
20 years later. (Anyone interested in a spellbinding account of how
I fell on my head can read more about it in I SHOULD HAVE STAYED HOME:
THE WORST TRIPS OF THE GREAT WRITERS, edited by Roger Rapoport and Marguerita
Castanera, Book Passage Press, 1994).
Ten years later, I have nearly finished writing the sequel to THE EIGHT.
But since it takes me five years from the moment I sit down at my desk
and begin to actually work on the story and, from inception to completion,
even 20, this is par for the course. And surprisingly, no one, including
my agents, editors, publishers or even my readers, EVER asked me to
speed up the process, to write more quickly. Ballantine has changed
management, even ownership, three times since my first book was published,
and each group has been as supportive as the previous one about letting
me "do my own thing." This is not as unusual as it may seem.
Years ago, I had dinner with a publisher who asked whether I'd rather
be rich or immortal. "Does it have to be a choice?" I asked,
and he said that it did. I said, if it's either-or, I would choose immortality.
Many of the writers I most enjoy reading took a long, long time to write
their books, and those books are still in print today. Though it may
sound immodest, I hope people will still be reading what I wrote 50
or even 100 years from now.
The challenge of writing a sequel to THE EIGHT has not been to top
myself in writing another bestseller. I honestly never expected to write
bestsellers. The challenge for me has been to continue to write books
that are unique. While there's no 'formula' for that, I'm quite sure
about the process ‹ it takes time and an understanding group of
agents, editors, and publishers. Luckily, I have both.
© 2005 Katherine Neville
For twenty years, Katherine
Neville was an international consultant and computer executive.
THE EIGHT, her first novel, remains a bestseller in more than twenty
languages and was voted one of the top ten books of all time in Spain.
A CALCULATED RISK was also a NEW YORK TIMES Notable Book. Her third
novel, THE MAGIC CIRCLE, a USA TODAY bestseller, was among the top ten
books in France, Spain, and Australia. She lives in Washington D.C.
and Virginia.
[Editor's Note: This article first appeared in THE 3RD DEGREE, the
official newsletter of the Mystery Writers of America, 2004]
lynds.jpgNoted book reviewer and critic Tom Nolan quietly broke a story in May 2004 in THE WALL STREET JOURNAL in which he described two important publishing trends in espionage thrillers that have escaped the notice of some literary pundits: The form is thriving, and female authors bought new trenchcoats, belted them on, and infiltrated.
Take it from me, both pieces of information are subversive.
Once the globe's top reading choice, with tens of millions of copies sold annually, this male-dominated, reliable genre collapsed with the end of the Cold War. As NEW YORK TIMES critic Walter Goodman announced funereally in November 1989, the same month the Berlin Wall crumbled: "The future looks dismal for the trenchcoat set."
In the short term, he was prophetic. Sales of bestselling thriller authors plummeted, while new authors seldom found publishing homes. (This was when my first one was released. More about that shortly.) By 1998, two thriller icons, Frederick Forsyth and John le Carré, had declared it was time to accept reality: The black business of espionage no longer interested readers. Both men fled to fresh literary turf.
The gloomy forecasts in the TIMES have continued unabated for some fifteen years, right up to as recently as February 2004, when Charles ("Chip") McGrath worried: "What's odd is that most of our thriller writers - the people who in the past have taught us most of what we know about intelligence gathering and intelligence failure ' don't seem to be interested in the post-9/11 landscape.... [T]hey're writing instead about corporate espionage and theological cover-ups in the Middle Ages. To understand what's going on in the world, ... we readers now have to turn to nonfiction...."
Ouch. Still, with some 160,000 books published annually, it's perhaps forgivable that even the august TIMES occasionally misses a trend here or there. However, other news media have not.
The capitalist truth is that the spy form is thriving. In fact, according to PW NEWSLINE, the "espionage/thriller" category jumped a whopping 34 percent in sales in 2003.
There's a lesson to be learned from a closely aligned genre, the mystery: Let's take a quick trip down mystery'''s memory lane to 1977, when Marcia Muller's first book, EDWIN OF THE IRON SHOES, was published to resounding silence. It was a tiny printing by a soon-to-be defunct publisher, who was nevertheless willing to take a risk on a woman who had written a serious detective novel about a smart, strong, realistic female private investigator (P.I.), Sharon McCone.
No one noticed, including Ms. Muller, that the book was not only ground-breaking, it dealt a roundhouse blow to the old boys' stranglehold on P.I. fiction. (Note: The thirtieth in the Sharon McCone series, THE DANGEROUS HOUR, was published in July 2004 by Mysterious Press.)
For five long years after her debut, Ms. Muller could find no new publisher, but then neither could any other woman. In fact, the entire genre was foundering --- much as spy thrillers later would do in the 1990s. The problem: Mysteries had fallen victim to too much of the same for nearly a half century.
Finally, in 1982, within months of one another, the fresh voices of Sara Paretsky (INDEMNITY ONLY) and Sue Grafton (A IS FOR ALIBI) burst onto the publishing scene, soon followed by Ms. Muller's return plus a flood of other female authors. Because a majority of the newcomers were fine writers creating interesting, relevant books, they reinvigorated the P.I. form, and the doors swung open wider, welcoming new male authors.
Readers and booksellers and publishers were happy. Cash registers sang.
Since I am concerned about the continuing invisibility attached by some to the future of new writers --- both male and female --- welcomed into the spy thriller field at last, and since I am weary of these endless death notices for our reinvigorated form because they insult not only us but readers, I am now going to serve myself up as evidence.
Consider me the sacrificial literary goat.
As Mr. Nolan documents in his WALL STREET JOURNAL piece, I finished my first spy thriller, my debut, MASQUERADE, in 1994. My agent sent it to the president of one of the top New York houses. She told my agent, "I love this book. I want to buy it. But no woman could’ve written it, so I’m not going to make an offer."
Blatant sexism, it appears, although maybe not so. It was also a low period in the thriller market.
Steve Rubin of Doubleday, who is rightly considered a visionary publisher, saw it differently. Doubleday published MASQUERADE in hardcover in 1996, and Berkley sold so many copies in paperback in 1997 that it hit THE NEW YORK TIMES extended list. Some 20 countries also published MASQUERADE, while PEOPLE magazine named it "Page-turner of the Week."
Although MASQUERADE sold well and received many glowing reviews, there was a taint to it, an odor of "she doesn’t belong; she's writing the wrong thing." In fact, the nadir for me was when the male reviewer of a large metropolitan newspaper stopped me in the bar at a writers’ conference and asked why I wanted to cut off the private parts of male authors and readers, because that’s what I was doing by working in the genre.
Another version was delivered in print by the reviewer of a publishing industry magazine, who complimented me for so admirably "aping" my male betters.
Was it really because I was a woman, or was it because the field was deemed dead, which meant that if I were actually rather good at what I did, and readers enjoyed it, I was a threat to the shared wisdom?
For perspective, let's fast-forward to today. I’m now at St. Martin’s Press with Keith Kahla, such a terrific editor he could make Maxwell Perkins snap to, and my first novel with St. Martin’s was released last April. Called THE COIL, it’s the sequel to MASQUERADE.
BOOKPAGE not only named THE COIL one of its notable new titles, it also called MASQUERADE, a "tour-de-force." Book critic Paul Goat Allen explained, "With the release of MASQUERADE in 1996, Gayle Lynds joined the deified ranks of spy thriller authors like Robert Ludlum and John le Carré."
Interestingly, Mr. Allen was not the first to heap glory on MASQUERADE. At publication some eight years before, a few reviewers had also called it a tour-de-force, but their voices never rose above the suffocating confines of the genre's mass entombment.
After that, Pocket Books brought out my next two spy thrillers, MOSAIC and MESMERIZED, again highly political and again dealing with the post–Cold War world.
Yes, Mr. McGrath, many of us continued to not only write but publish those books for which you yearned but somehow missed.
In his insistent TIMES essay, he also noted wistfully, "[Nonfiction books aren’t] as much fun as novels, though, and they also lack the sulfurous whiff of cynicism and conspiracy that makes good thrillers so satisfying."
The man was obviously fond of vintage spy stories. But then, many of us were and are while also liking our cynicism and conspiracy delivered in contemporary tales.
Another journalist who obviously enjoyed them, too --- renowned reviewer Dick Adler of THE CHICAGO TRIBUNE --- wrote two months later, "Where are the new Robert Ludlums and Tom Clancys coming from?" He so believed in the thriller's future that he answered his own question: "Here's one excellent candidate: the tough-minded and talented Gayle Lynds, who co-wrote several books with Ludlum and introduced us to Liz Sansborough – a psychology professor at the University of California at Santa Barbara and an ex-CIA agent – in the gripping MASQUERADE."
Within days of those comments, book critic David Montgomery observed astutely In JANUARY magazine, "The thriller genre has been pronounced dead so many times that it would seemingly take a miracle even to get it on life-support." Mr. Montgomery also reviews for THE CHICAGO SUN-TIMES, USA TODAY, and THE BOSTON GLOBE. Thoroughly steeped in the field, he, too, disagrees with the TIMES's nay-saying Mr. McGrath: "[Y]ou can't believe everything you read these days, for not only is the thriller not dead, but it is alive and well and safe in the hands of outstanding authors such as Gayle Lynds."
As Mr. McGrath noted, 9/11 happened. His view is that it changed nothing.
Wrong. After those horrifying attacks, Americans abruptly shook off their post–Cold War exhaustion and resumed a vigorous interest in the world at large, searching for information and, ultimately, understanding of what had happened, why it had happened, and what to do about it. We are a nation of readers, so of course we turned to books, but not only to nonfiction, which Mr. McGrath claims.
One of our favored resources is through the lens of good political fiction, which is what the best spy novels are (and which helps account for the surge of sales in 2003.)
Which is also what I write about, passionately, stubbornly, cloaked in what I hope is rousing adventure, as do many other authors who entered print after the Iron Curtain crashed — Daniel Silva, Jenny Siler, Francine Mathews, Robert Cullen, Vince Flynn, Brad Thor, Brian Haig, Raelynn Hillhouse --- to name only a few.
It’s time for Mr. McGrath and other bespectacled dinosaurs to look realistically at espionage thrillers again. They’re not only alive, readers are excited about them. And as Mr. Nolan observes in THE WALL STREET JOURNAL, an industry sea change is occurring just as it did in mysteries 20 years ago: Authors are infusing new life and much-needed sensibilities into a much-beloved form that had been not only at risk of becoming disconnected but of becoming a caricature of itself.
The best political fiction is so relevant that it’s predictive, a quality we can claim. Mr. McGrath’s insult that "most of our thriller writers don’t seem to be interested in the post-9/11 landscape" refers more to his narrow reading habits than it does to our work, nor does it apply to the recent books of Frederick Forsyth and John le Carré, who have rejoined us: They’re back in print with very contemporary spy tales.
But then, there’s so much to write about, proving again what J. Edgar Hoover said many years ago, "There’s something about a secret that’s addicting." When you read our books, you’ll know why.
© 2004 Gayle Lynds
Gayle Lynds is the NEW YORK TIMES best-selling author of THE COIL, MASQUERADE, MOSAIC, and MESMERIZED. With Robert Ludlum, she wrote THE HADES FACTOR, THE PARIS OPTION, and THE ALTMAN CODE. A former newspaper reporter and magazine editor, she was also an editor at a think tank where she had Top Secret security clearance.
Eric Van Lustbader
When I was about nine, my father got very sick and had to stay
home from work. My parents decided that they didn't want to me to see
him like that, so they shipped me off to summer camp. I hated it. I
hated living in a bunk with other boys, I hated having to get up at
a certain time, eat at a certain time, join in team sports at a certain
time, well, you get the idea.
But the thing I hated most of all was feeling as if I had to join the
idiotic and often humiliating male-bonding rituals devised by the bunk
bully. In fact, I didn't. And though this act of defiance earned me
nothing but ridicule from my bunkmates and threats from the bully, I
never backed down. The fact was I couldn't. Being alone -- being my
own person -- was so precious to me that I risked everything for it,
even being called "The Outsider."
One of the questions I'm asked over and over (and it's a
good one) is how I'm able to write in both the thriller and the
fantasy genres. It seems to me the proper way to answer is to ask instead
what drew me to these genres in the first place.
Not surprisingly, I suppose, these were the two forms of novels I read
as a teenager, and since I was a voracious reader I consumed tons of
them, good, bad and ugly. On the surface there wouldn't seem to
be any similarity between a spy story and a fantasy saga, but the fact
is there must have been and there is for me to have
been attracted to both.
To begin at the beginning, as the Red Queen said, I was never a joiner.
Already fascinated by psychology and sociology, I read all about peer
pressure and the havoc it wreaked on teens. I found this peculiar because
I myself never responded to peer pressure. Only years later did I recognize
the price I paid for not being a hale fellow well-met.
I was always on the outside of society looking in, and even though that
was where I'd chosen to be, it was a lonely existence. I grew
up with a tangible fear of being "normal" of marrying,
moving to the suburbs, having 2.5 kids and a dog, spending my time with
other couples talking about every minute phase of our children's
development from poop to verbalization skills.
In fact, I was so terrified of "normalcy" that during my
wedding I took off my suit jacket and put on a black satin baseball-style
jacket that had "Don't Fear the Reaper" emblazoned
across its back that I'd designed for Blue Oyster Cult during
my days working at CBS Records.
Okay, so now we know how it all ties together, right? The common thread
running through my two favorite genres was "the outsider."
The protagonists in both thrillers and fantasies are misfits, those
people who because of their special skills are outside the mainstream
of society. In both genres, the protagonists struggle mightily both
to control their gifts and the terrible forms of loneliness they must
endure. And, too, there is a larger, even more fascinating problem that
both genres address: the struggle of the outsider to find oneself and
to come to terms with who one is.
As a Sociology major at Columbia College, this problem was the one that
engaged me most fully, and it was when I came to understand my own nature
and, eventually, to recognize the burning desire inside me to write
about the special nature of the outsider.
Of course, I had help with this. The seminal moment in my outsider epiphany
was when I picked up a book appropriately titled THE OUTSIDER, a nonfiction
treatise on the alienation of modern man, written by a brilliant English
writer by the name of Colin Wilson. Soon thereafter, I read his astonishing
A CASEBOOK OF MURDER, a horrifying and mesmerizing compendium of the
world's most macabre murder cases. Then I discovered that he was
a novelist as well: THE BLACK ROOM, LINGARD, and NECESSARY DOUBT.
What drew me to Wilson's subject matter was exactly what drew
me to thrillers and fantasy: I wanted to read about people who were
outsiders, who felt themselves to be at the borders of society
both those like me, who live a moral life, as well as the terrifying
others, at the extreme fringes of "otherness," who consider
themselves to be beyond the law.
Though I had been writing in one form or another virtually since the
moment I had learned to spell, once I understood the truth of who I
was, there was no getting around it. It was time to create the novels
of outsiders that were firing inside me.
© 2005 Eric Van Lustbader
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Eric Van
Lustbader was born and raised in Greenwich Village. He is the author
of more than twenty five best-selling novels including THE NINJA in
which he introduced Nicholas Linnear, one of modern fiction's most beloved
and enduring heroes. For the last several years, he has devoted himself
to writing THE PEARL fantasy series. His novels have been translated
into over twenty languages and are bestsellers worldwide. They are so
popular whole sections of bookstores from Bangkok to Dublin are devoted
to them. His latest bestseller is THE BOURNE LEGACY.
Gregg Hurwitz
High-stakes a ticking clock violence on the page
the audience's being aware of the villain's plotting‹odds are
you're already familiar with the elements that define a thriller if
you've found your way to this website. You've also likely stumbled over
the classic blurb and jacket-copy catch-phrases that these fundamentals,
when well executed, give rise to: "breakneck pacing," "white-knuckle
action," "roller-coaster ride," "better than CATS."
Okay, so maybe not the last one.
The bottom line is, thrillers are often badder, meaner, and bigger
than other forms of crime fiction. Think Thomas Harris over Agatha Christie,
or, in other mediums, 24 over MURDER, SHE WROTE, or IN THE LINE OF FIRE
over SLEUTH. In a thriller, you're more likely to find Dr. Lecter in
the kitchen with liver and fava beans than Colonel Mustard in the conservatory
with the candlestick. So it goes. Concerned parent groups lobby here.
Having the reader in the pretentiously titled "superior"
position - meaning they're riding shotgun with the good guys AND the
bad guys through various scenes - of course doesn't mean that there
aren't surprises (or, in blurbspeak "more twists and turns than
a.."). I tend to structure my books so that the reader follows
both sides of an impending collision, but the scenes with the antagonists
I write a bit more hazy on specifics, so it's never entirely clear what
they're up to or when the plot is going to reverse itself. Toward the
end of a book, I'll often have my antagonist fall out of the plot for
several chapters, so his or her reappearance is startling - surprising
due to machinations set in motion while the author (poor sod) took his
eye off the ball.
When this balance between what is shown and what is withheld is struck,
readers get to have their cake and eat it too. They get all the excitement
of the Red Dragon planning his next slaughter, yet also all the shock
of Francis Dolarhyde paying a violent visit to Will Graham's house in
the novel's closing pages. We're shown a lot, but we still don't know
what's going to happen next. Great thrillers hook us like that - we
gorge ourselves all the way along, yet our appetite only increases.
When I read RED DRAGON , I was living alone in a two-room apartment.
At one a.m., I set down the book and checked under every bed and in
every closet in the place. At three a.m., behind my locked bedroom door,
I finished it. Still awake at four, I started rereading THE SILENCE
OF THE LAMBS . So go the confessions of a thriller junkie.
As a rule, research seems to play a significant role in thrillers.
Of course, authors of other genres can be brilliant researchers (here
I envision Tom Wolfe bludgeoning me with an ivory-headed cane for my
crass generalization) but thriller writers in particular seem to enjoy
rolling up their sleeves and getting dirt under their fingernails. Maybe
this is because thrillers are rife with bomb-making and forensic trails-try
writing about THOSE convincingly without doing some field work.
I use my books almost as an excuse for continuing education. I've sneaked
onto demolition ranges with Navy SEALs to blow up cars, conducted an
interview with a hospital tech as he carved up a cadaver to deliver
its parts to dissection lab, and most recently for THE PROGRAM , I went
undercover into mind-control cults in Los Angeles so I could create
my own cult (for the novel, that is - or I suppose in real life too
if I ever get bored). Interacting with cult members, witnessing the
effusive testimonials, participating in group exercises, and submitting
to "testing" gave me the background I needed to add the telling
detail to give THE PROGRAM its verisimilitude. I suppose that's what
I love the most about thrillers - it's as much goddamned fun to write
them as to read them.
© 2005 Gregg Hurwitz
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Gregg
Hurwitz is the critically acclaimed, bestselling author of THE TOWER,
MINUTES TO BURN, DO NO HARM, THE KILL CLAUSE, and most recently, THE
PROGRAM. He holds a B.A. from Harvard, and a master's degree from Trinity
College, Oxford. He lives in Los Angeles, where he is currently writing
the next Tim Rackley novel and the screen adaptation of THE KILL CLAUSE
for Paramount Pictures.
By Raelynn Hillhouse
The real world of spies is often too far-fetched to make believable
fiction. One of my biggest challenges in writing spy thrillers has been
to tone-down my own real-life experiences to make "realistic"
fiction. You see, I spent many years in the bizarre, shadowy world of
smugglers, black-marketers and spies and I know first hand that truth
is indeed stranger than fiction.
I've crossed the Iron Curtain hundreds of times. Strange things happened
there ‹ things so implausible that they would make a seasoned
reader hurl a book across the room. But, it's true that:
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In East Germany, a tiny police car packed with five men screeched to a halt not far from where I was traipsing through the woods. I looked on as a guy with dark glasses, a black leather jacket and an attaché case handcuffed to his arm popped from the car, then disappeared into the brush.
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A man opened up a hollow coin (clandestinely, he thought) to flash a secret badge to the Stasi border guard. He didn't know I saw it.
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In a restaurant in Krakow, Poland, I had a stranger come up and ask to swap chairs with menot places, but the actual chair, with the explanation that there might not seem to be any difference to me, but there was a big one to him. The chairs looked identical, but we can only guess that one was wired a little differently.
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In Prague, I was once awakened in my hotel room by a sound suddenly coming from the nightstandthat of a reel-to-reel tape recorder automatically rewinding.
Attaché cases handcuffed to the wrist, hollow coins, bugged chairs
and nightstands ‹ who would ever believe that? It was this Keystone
Cops, B-grade-spy-movie aspect of life out in the cold that kept me
entertained and going back for more time and time again. And it's this
very facet that is the hardest to portray in a spy thriller. The bottom
line is that you really can't. You have to tone down reality down so
that it seems "real."
RIFT ZONE opens with scenes in which the East German secret police try
to set up a young smuggler from the Ozarks in a sting. They hope to
entrap her by convincing her to smuggle a decrepit Western-made computer
to the West, then nail her at the border for stealing state property.
They even follow her through the Wall into the West.
Sound too far-fetched?
It's not. It happened to me.
I grew up in the rural Ozarks, some 30 miles from the fictional home
of the Beverly Hillbillies, where my family had settled 200 years earlier.
I yearned to learn more about the outside world beyond the hills. When
I was 20, instead of loading up the truck and moving to Beverly, I headed
for Europe in search of adventure. Soon I found it in Central and Eastern
Europe during the last desperate days of communism.
Over the next six years, East German and Libyan intelligence services attempted to recruit me as a spy. (They failed.) I stared down the barrels of Kalashnikovs and I was tailed by secret police from Uzbekistan to Czechoslovakia. I learned how to slip across borders and talk my way through closed checkpoints. My phones were tapped and my hotel rooms bugged. My friends were asked questions about me. And, once, I was caught in the crossfire of East German border guards. I took one in the arm, but, fortunately, it was the crossfire of a snowball fight. Even communist border guards sometimes played games.
In September 1983, I landed in West Germany, with two suitcases and a dictionary. I knew no one, spoke only broken German and could barely order something to eat. It didn't take too many meals of swine feet to expand my dining vocabulary. In a short time my German was fluent and I spoke without an accent. This meant I now could blend in. Blending in was key to what I would soon find myself doing to help supplement my meager scholarships: smuggling. I had to appear so normal and so ordinary that I would fade into the background and not draw undue attention from the secret police. I had heard wild tales of Americans selling U.S. goods on the black market in Moscow. After selling my first pairs of jeans and sneakers in the East, I realized it wasn't a very smart thing to do. Not only was the transaction highly illegal in the communist system, which forbade any form of free enterprise, it was a money losing venture. Given the price of jeans and sneakers in the West, it was nearly impossible to sell them for a price high enough to turn a profit. I looked to find something that was cheaper that I could sell for a higher markup. Capitalism has its rules.
On one trip to Moscow, Pan Am lost a friend's luggage. We sprinted all over Moscow trying to find decent clothes and shoes for him to wear all summer. At GUM Department Store across from the Kremlin, the only underwear we could find had no visible front or back. The People's Own Underwear was unisex. All of a sudden, I realized there was a huge market for something I could sell at a higher markup than blue jeans: lingerie was the ticket. I didn't go for the enticing styles of Frederick's of Hollywood or even Victoria's Secret. I chose the cheap, considerably less flamboyant and certainly less erotic Kmart variety. So it worked like this: I brought ladies' lingerie into the Soviet Union, sold it for rubles, used the rubles to purchase jewels on the black market, then smuggled the stones to the West. In essence, I was turning Kmart panties into diamonds. (And for those of you who are thinking, "My God, she's a criminal," be aware that I've broken no laws in countries that still exist.)
It was all great fun and adventure ‹ I was young and carefree ‹ until I caught the attention of the Stasi, the East German secret police. Although few Americans were allowed into East Berlin other than as tourists on day visas, I had been awarded a scholarship by the East German government to study at Humboldt University for a year. Now I was sharing a flat with some friends in West Berlin. A few weeks before I was to go to the East, we noticed that our phone started making clicking sounds. My friend, Karim, who had grown up in a repressive military dictatorship in Africa, immediately knew what that meant. So did I. Our phone was bugged.
On one point, my roommates could all agree: I was the cause. In those days we really didn't care that someone was listening to our conversations. We were students and, frankly, the only secret we felt we had to protect was Karim's compulsion to date more than one woman at a time. Still, we speculated a lot over coffee or beer about the bugging. Was it the Americans wanting to know what I was up to in the East? Did the East German secret police, the infamous Stasi, want to check me out before they let me loose to study in their tightly controlled, closely guarded communist fiefdom? Or could it even be the Brits? After all, West Berlin was officially under military occupation and we lived in the British sector of Berlin.
A few weeks later the phone call came. Ominously, it was from the East.
Of course, a call from East Berlin to West Berlin in those dangerous days was rare. At that time, East and West Berlin had a combined population of about 3 million people and there were less than a dozen phone lines between both halves of the city.
The call was from Egon, my point person, my case officer at the League for International Friendship, the Stasi-front organization that was sponsoring me. Egon wanted to discuss my visa for the upcoming year. He also had a favor to ask. I was hoping to hear the good news that my request would be granted and I would be receiving a rare privilege: permission to cross freely between East and West Berlin. I had been told my visa was under consideration ‹ something clearly related to the favor. I steeled myself for what was coming. Egon wanted me to help the League by lugging a broken Xerox machine through Checkpoint Charlie to his special repairman in the West. He wasn't asking me to smuggle it west, but to openly transport it there. After that, he said, he was sure he'd be able to help me with my visa. His request raised more red flags than a May Day parade on Red Square.
The communist regimes were hopelessly paranoid when it came to the idea of a free press. (Fall 1989 proved their paranoia was justified.) They didn't want to risk the idea that anyone could copy and disseminate anti-government propaganda. As a consequence, there weren't many copy machines on the communist side. To use one or even work near one, you had to have a security clearance. Such a clearance would never be granted to an American. In fact, the moment I was around any copying machine ‹ broken or not ‹ I would be in violation of East German laws. It was unthinkable. It was a setup. And I didn't know what to do.
My experiences with the American Embassy had not been positive. My passport, covered in stamps from communist borders, raised as many suspicions with them as Egon did with me. I knew I was on my own. I could either head back to the hills or see how things played out.
At the same time the next afternoon, the phone rang again. It was Egon. My stomach knotted. I tried to excuse myself from the deal because the repairs would be too expensive and I didn't have much Western cash. No problem. Despite the fact that Western currency was forbidden to him, Egon claimed to have plenty in petty cash to foot the bill. Egon had a solution for my every excuse. He even volunteered to write a note to the Stasi border guards, asking to excuse me from the various laws I was violating. Yeah, right.
One gray September day in Berlin, I crossed east to begin my studies. Egon talked to me this time in person about the copier. I hedged. Standing on the eastern side of the Berlin Wall, making excuses to the Stasi, changed drastically what had seemed like a big game to something terrifyingly real. The Wall had that effect on people.
I knew from firsthand experience that the secret police really did make people disappear. A couple of summers earlier, I had studied in Romania. I arrived in Transylvania on the Orient Express and, on the last leg of my journey, met a young Romanian student, Alexander, who studied in my destination city. We conversed in French, discussing the world beyond Romania that he longed to visit someday. I was reminded of myself, growing up in the Ozarks a few years earlier, talking to foreigners at every chance to learn about the outside world. When we arrived in the city of Cluj, Alex helped me find the dorm where I was to stay. I got to know him, his brother and sister, a medical student. I didn't realize that in neo-Stalinist Romania it was illegal for Romanians to have contact with foreigners. Any accidental contacts had to be reported to the police within 24 hours.
One morning, I was supposed to meet Alex for coffee. He didn't show up. I went to the place where he lived. His neighbors wouldn't make eye contact with me. His sister walked away. No one would speak to me. His little brother indicated there had been a knock on the door in the middle of the night.
I have no idea what the secret police did to him ‹ or if he survived.
Now I stood in East Berlin a few years later, trying to avoid cutting a deal with someone I knew worked for one of the world's most notorious secret police organizations. The reality of the spy game was sinking in. I began to wonder what I was getting into or if I would ever get myself out of it.
I did slither out of it. And I lived to tell about it in the opening of my first spy thriller. So when a reviewer at a major paper wrote, "She [my heroine] is pressed into service (somewhat unbelievably) by the East Germans," I understood why truth really is stranger than fiction: truth doesn't have to worry about reviewers.
© 2004 and 2005 Raelynn Hillhouse
Raelynn Hillhouse has been recruited as a spy by both Libyan and East German intelligence. (They failed.) A former professor and Fulbright Fellow, she has run rum, smuggled jewels, and laundered money between East and West. The American Booksellers Association (Book Sense) selected her debut novel, RIFT ZONE, as one of the best books of 2004.
Portions of this article first appeared in SPIRIT OF ALOHA, the inflight magazine of Aloha Airlines.
By James Grippando
Autumn 2004 marked the ten-year anniversary of the publication
of my first novel, THE PARDON. Nine novels later, I suppose it's time
to look back and ask, COULD I DO IT ALL OVER AGAIN?
The answer is a resounding: ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND?
I wrote THE PARDON in seven months, and HarperCollins snatched it up
in just a few days. A snap, right? Wrong. My first PUBLISHED novel was
not my first novel. And its debut came a full six years after I began
my labor of love --- that first misstep in the unending quest for the
Holy Grisham Grail.
In January 1988 I turned thirty, five years into the practice of law.
A trial lawyer is in many ways a storyteller. Still, I had no idea how
to become a novelist. I was on track toward partnership at Steel Hector
& Davis, a prestigious Miami law firm considered by many to be Florida's
finest. Attorney General Janet Reno got her start there. The presidents
of both the American and Florida Bar practiced there. Young lawyers
like me were supposed to follow career paths that might someday lead
us to similar distinction. No one at Steel was on track to becoming
a writer.
So, I set a couple of ground rules. First, I would do my writing on
the sly, nights and weekends, while continuing to bill my obligatory
two thousand hours a year. Second --- and this was by far the most important
rule --- I was determined to keep it fun. With that, I set out on my
adventure, keeping a journal along the way. What follows is a selective
chronology of events. I've kept it light, though many of these things
weren't very funny at the time. But at least there's a happy ending
--- along with the highs and lows, fits and starts, warts and all.
A NOVEL IDEA
LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1988. At a holiday barbecue, friends are knocking
off spare ribs and gushing over Scott Turow's PRESUMED INNOCENT. "And
he wrote it while riding to work on the train," someone says. I
tell no one, but I decide to write a novel.
NOVEMBER 24. My girlfriend thinks my first hundred pages are kind of
interesting, but the x's and y's are driving her crazy. She suggests
I actually NAME my characters so that it reads more like a novel and
less like an algebraic equation. I want the lead lawyer to have an Italian
surname, like me, so I come up with Bianchi. The name nags me a little
--- sounds familiar, but I can't quite place it.
NOVEMBER 25. Bianchi is out. He was the California Hillside Strangler.
JANUARY 1989. I focus my story, and --- surprise! --- it's a legal thriller.
Can't decide whether the lead character should be the young and beautiful
lawyer or her silver-haired mentor. So I make them BOTH lead characters.
Mistake Number One.
MARCH 1. I write my first love scene.
MARCH 2. I cut my first love scene. Check out D.H. Lawrence from the
library.
JULY. After ten months of writing, I print a hard copy. And print, and
print. Twelve hundred pages! Every interesting tidbit I've read in the
newspaper or picked up at cocktail party since Labor Day has somehow
made its way into the story. And it reads more like a family saga than
a legal thriller. Which is it? BOTH, I decide. Mistake Number Two.
HOW TO GET PUBLISHED, NOT EXACTLY BY THE
BOOK
AUGUST-NOVEMBER. I circulate finished drafts to friends for serious
feedback. The operative word here is friends. Kind of like asking my
mother if she thinks I'm handsome.
JANUARY 1991. I go crazy buying "How To" books. But they DO
teach me one thing: I must have a literary agent. I aim right for the
top: Robert Ludlum's agent.
APRIL 26. Success! Ludlum's agent wants to read my manuscript. He is
concerned, however, that the market for lawyer-novels may be getting
over-crowded. No kidding, Sherlock.
JUNE 2. Rejection from Ludlum's agent. Says a first novel should be
about 100,000 words. I run a word count on my computer. Over 250,000
words. I've created a monster.
JUNE 3. There's a new kid on the block, some guy named John Grisham.
I wonder how his agent would feel about a 250,000-word . . . trilogy
--- yeah, that's the ticket. A TRILOGY.
JUNE 27. Still waiting on Grisham's agent, I mail off another query
to Arthur Pine. Pine's listing in THE WRITER'S MARKET says George Burns
is a client. Nice reference. Anybody who represents God must be honest.
JULY 2. A phone call from Artie Pine. Likes my story, but he senses
it probably needs a shave and a haircut. What a diplomat. I think the
diagnosis from Ludlum's agent was "terminally obese." Artie
wants to see the first two chapters and the big climax. Terrific. Now
all I have to do is figure out what's my big climax.
JULY 12. Unable to find it, I write the big climax and FedEx the package
to Artie.
JULY 14. Artie likes it but says no publisher will buy a 250,000-word
manuscript from a no-name author. If I'll agree to cut it to a marketable
length, he'll agree to represent me. That sounds like a fair offer.
I don't tell him it's my ONLY offer.
THE SLIM-FAST DIET FOR BOOKS
AUGUST. Nothing happens. If ever I decide to take over the publishing
industry, it will be in August. No one would suspect a thing until they
all returned from vacation after Labor Day.
NOVEMBER 17. Each November means The Miami International Book Fair,
and I hang on every word as a panel of experts --- a first-time author,
two literary agents and a publisher --- explain how to get published.
During the Q&A session, frustrated writers step up to the microphone
and beg the panelists to PLEASE read their manuscripts. I wonder if
next year I'll be one of the panelists or one of the desperate souls
stepping up to the microphone.
DECEMBER. A trip to NYC to meet my agent on West 57th Street. Simple
offices, but the collage on the wall tells the story. A colorful scattering
of hardcover book jackets --- bestsellers, books-to-movies, and a huge
blow-up of the NEW YORK TIMES list with James Patterson at #1. Patterson
has not yet hit #1. He made the blow-up to help his agent visualize
the goal. "Patterson will be huge someday," says Artie.
MAY 1992. A thousand pages have been whittled down to five hundred and
change. Nearly four years of work may actually pay off. Artie makes
no predictions but thinks it will sell. I'm sure of it: I'M GOING TO
BE AN AUTHOR.
AT LEAST HE GOT KISSED
MAY 21. I have a blind date with Tiffany Russell. She's beautiful
-- and a voracious reader with a degree in English Literature. I tell
her about my novel. She'd love to read it, can't wait to get inside
my head. INSIDE MY HEAD? Suddenly, I feel naked, or at least like my
fly is open.
JULY. Artie calls. We've gotten a few rejections. Not to worry. "It
only takes one."
AUGUST 24. Hurricane Andrew rips through south Florida. The Russell
home is destroyed. Tiff, her mom, dad and grandmother move into my two
bedroom town house for the week. Lucky for them they gave my book a
favorable review.
LABOR DAY WEEKEND. Artie forwards me a two-page letter from a big New
York editor. She's impressed, thinks the characters and story are rich
and fully developed. I read on. My hand begins to shake. Unfortunately,
she writes, we are in an age of minimalist writing. "After a lot
of thought, I've decided against it." My heart sinks. She was our
last shot. We crashed and burned. The book didn't sell. I step outside
and pitch her letter in the mountain of hurricane debris that used to
be my parking space. Writing sucks.
SEPTEMBER. I'm a lawyer. I love practicing law.
MID-SEPTEMBER. Artie calls. I brace myself for something along the lines
of goodbye and good wishes. But Artie the optimist proves true to form:
"Jim, you got the most ENCOURAGING rejection letters I've ever
seen." I figure Artie must have invented the word "spin."
But what the hell. New book. New idea. Am I up for it? Of course. I'm
a writer. I love to write.
September came and went, life after Hurricane Andrew was becoming somewhat
normal, and I had made zero progress on my second book. One night around
one a.m., I needed a break from my computer, so I went for a walk. As
I reached the dimly lit street corner, a squad car appeared out of nowhere.
It came to a halt on the grassy part of the curb, blocking my path.
"Can I see some identification?" the cop said.
I had none --- no wallet, no drivers license, nothing. The lawyer in
me was tempted to explain to this fascist that the Constitution doesn't
require people in this country to carry ID, but he cut me off. Someone
reported a peeping-Tom in the neighborhood. I stood nervously beside
the squad car as he called in on his radio for a description of the
prowler. Our eyes locked in a tense stare, and as the dispatcher recited
the physical description, I could almost see him ticking off similarities
on his mental check list.
"Under six feet," the dispatcher said. CHECK.
"Thirty to thirty-five years old." CHECK.
"Brown hair, brown eyes." DOUBLE CHECK.
"Blue shorts, white T-shirt." HOLY CRAP! I'M GOING TO JAIL!
"And a mustache," the dispatcher finally added.
The cop narrowed his eyes, trying to discern whether someone could have
mistakenly thought I had a mustache. Finally he said, "Go home."
I walked quickly, thankful I wasn't riding downtown in the back of a
squad car. An arrest would have surely put me in the newspaper --- PROMINENT
ATTORNEY CHARGED AS 'PEEPING TOM.' Just being arrested could have ruined
my reputation. When people watch the news at night and see that guy
stuffed into the back of squad car, their first thought usually isn't,
"Oh, look honey, there goes another innocent man off to jail."
It's usually something along the lines of HE DID IT. Or, IF HE WASN'T
DOING THIS, HE WAS PROBABLY DOING SOMETHING. Or even better: IF HE WASN'T
DOING IT THIS TIME, HE'S PROBABLY DONE A WHOLE LOT OF OTHER THINGS.
. . . Your last thought is that this is a totally innocent person. It's
only human nature.
My life had nearly changed forever. And in a way, it had. More than
four years after starting my first novel, I suddenly had an idea for
a second.
OFF TO THE RACES
OCTOBER 4, 3 A.M. Page One, Chapter One. A death row inmate faces
imminent execution for a murder he may not have committed. I call it
THE GOVERNOR'S PARDON.
MARCH 6, 1993. Dinner with Tiff at Lutece in New York. Snow falls on
Saturday morning as we skate at Rockefeller Center. When the right music
finally plays, I chase her around the ice until I can get her to stop
in front of the gold statue of Prometheus. Irving Berlin's I'LL BE LOVING
YOU ... ALWAYS, is in its third chorus by the time I get my glove off
and show her the ring. When she hugs me and accepts, the surrounding
crowd looking down on the rink cheers. Good thing this is real life.
It would make awfully corny fiction.
APRIL 26. After seven months of work, Artie loves my new novel. We're
changing the title to THE PARDON, and he's going to hold an auction.
This concerns me. When I think of auctions, I conjure up distress sales
--- you know, bankruptcy, going out of business. Artie laughs and assures
me that an auction is a good thing that happens only to big books. I'm
appeased for the moment. As I recall, however, they auctioned off Eastern
Airlines, too. THAT was big.
MAY 7. A call from Richard Pine, Artie's son --- the other half of the
dynamic duo. Rick Horgan, a senior editor at HarperCollins, wants to
talk to me on the phone.
MAY 8, 3:10 P.M. Horgan calls. NOW what? He wants to make sure that
I'm open to a few changes. I don't tell him, but he could probably persuade
me to turn it into a comedy. Maybe call it PRESUMED IGNORANT or TO MOCK
A KILLING BIRD. Just BUY the damn thing.
THURSDAY, MAY 13, 10:42 A.M. It's Artie on the phone. My heart stops.
"Congratulations, Jim, you're an author." He jumps to the
bottom line --- the advance. He mentions a modest five figure sum. It's
okay, I say. It's not about the money. I'm smiling and pacing across
the room with the phone against my ear. Artie's explaining hardcover,
paperback, foreign rights. Then he asks, "What did I say your advance
was?" I repeat it. Artie snickers. "Oh, I'm sorry. I left
off a zero." My jaw drops. To think, I probably would have paid
THEM to publish it. Thanks, Artie, for saving me from myself.
Naturally, I dreamed big. Bestseller. Hollywood. At work, where I had
managed to keep my writing a secret, I kidded the entire firm management
committee about appearing in my next novel as hatchet murderers, drug
addicts and prostitutes. They laughed --- NERVOUSLY.
My friends had very high expectations, which stemmed partly from their
faith in me, but mostly from their apparent unawareness that the average
first novel does not sell quite as many copies as, say, THE BIBLE. They
seemed to think that, once you sell the manuscript, all you do is run
it through the spell-check and pick a typeset. Wrong.
ESCAPE TO NEW YORK
JUNE 18. I'm going to New York to meet my editor. I always wanted
to say that. Cool.
JUNE 19, LUNCH. Rick takes me to some Italian place. Tells me they just
sold THE PARDON to the Dutch, which is a nice ice-breaker. I like him.
Good sense of humor. Honest enough to admit that he was one of three
editors given an early look at Grisham's THE FIRM and turned it down.
We get to talking about the American Booksellers Association convention
that just happened in Miami Beach and how everyone thought the hotels
were dreadful. I apologize, as if being from south Florida made the
accommodations my fault. Afterward, Rick takes me around the office.
I meet the Editor-in-Chief and her husband --- HUH? --- the publisher.
They're in the middle of a meeting with an important-looking fellow
who smiles and claims to have signed my check. I figure now isn't the
time to mention I still haven't GOTTEN my check.
JULY 7. The draft contract arrives from HarperCollins for my review.
Being a lawyer, I can't resist making some change, so I get out my red
pen and go for it: I add my middle initial to the signature block.
AUGUST 24. The check arrives. I guess it took six weeks for the publisher's
lawyers to approve that middle initial I added. I wonder if they billed
for all that time.
AUGUST 25, 2 A.M. Panic grips me as I lay awake in bed. Nearly three
months into the editing, and I still don't have the big new ending to
the story my editor wants. I wonder if I should cash the check.
DECEMBER 22. One more meeting with the editor in NYC. Loves my new ending,
but now he's not so sure about the beginning and the middle. Hands me
the full manuscript with his edits. He wants it cleaned up and back
no later than December 28 so the publisher and Editor-in-Chief can read
it. Merry Christmas.
DECEMBER 26. I've edited Rick's edits and fired right back at him with
a thirty-eight page letter justifying my every change. Ten years of
practicing law taught me something about working on holidays. The new
and improved version of THE PARDON is done. Alleluia!
BEYOND THE EDIT
JANUARY. Excitement is buzzing in-house. For the first time,
I hear Rick utter the words national bestseller --- I'm beginning to
think even HE likes it. Sounds beautiful. Oh, one other thing, Jim.
The publisher resigned this week.
FEBRUARY. Time to collect blurbs for the book jacket. Turns out, one
of my law partners grew up in Mississippi and still keeps in touch with
a lawyer in Jackson who considers himself a buddy of another lawyer
in Oxford who is pretty good friends with John Grisham. I pitch this
to Rick. When the laughter stops, he suggests we try Ernest Hemingway
next.
MARCH 4. The script arrives for the audio version of THE PARDON. Script?
I thought they would just hire someone to read MY BOOK. Hardly. My 100,000
words have been whittled down to 27,000 and change. Who the heck do
they have reading this thing, Mike Tyson?
MARCH 23. The artist's jacket design arrives. The first thing I notice
is "By James Grippando" in bold red letters. The second is
the naked woman. She's a dark, shadowy figure, strategically back-lighted
so that her erogenous zones glow in the dark. Among my friends, the
female reaction ranges from a quizzical "Hmmmmmm" to "Her
hips are fat." The men basically want her phone number. I'm not
so sure about this. Rick tells me they'll work on it.
APRIL. Things are still popping. The German rights sell, and THE PARDON
is selected by the Literary Guild, Mystery Guild, and the Doubleday
Book Club --- each of which has just acquired a new member for life,
or perhaps two, if you count me AND my mother. A visit to the bookstore
turns my euphoria to confusion. Book clubs have Selections, Main Selections,
Dual Main Selections, Alternate Selections, Featured Alternate Selections.
Given the stature of the other authors, I figure THE PARDON must have
been a random selection.
SATURDAY, APRIL 16. Fifty million Americans miss the deadline for filing
their income tax returns. The literary world mourns the loss of Ralph
Ellison, award-winning author of THE INVISIBLE MAN, dead at age eight-one.
Tiffany Suzanne Russell marries James Michael Grippando. Says I'm her
Main Selection.
EARLY MAY. My publicist at HarperCollins calls. There's a big push for
THE PARDON, and he's obviously concerned about finding some way ---
ANY way --- to draw attention to a completely unknown, first-time author.
I suggest lighting my hair on fire and running through bookstores naked.
He says he'll think about it.
MID-JUNE. Chills. My editor sends me a few leftover advance reader editions
of THE PARDON. It looks exactly like the real thing, only it's paperback.
But for me, it's my first book. I'm a writer. which of course means
that I never stop dreaming of real success. For me, that will come only
when I get my real first novel published --- that twelve hundred page
labor of love now resting on a shelf in my bedroom closet.
EPILOGUE.
My journal stopped just before THE PARDON was published. I'm
not sure why, but it probably had something to do with my first bad
review. Those things seemed so important back then. Now, my five-year-old
son and I make them into paper hats.
I don't remember everything about my first pub date, but even nine novels
later, there is one thing I know I'll never forget. It was a sunny south
Florida afternoon. I got in my red convertible (which has since been
traded in for two kids, a dog, and an SUV) and drove to a cozy neighborhood
bookstore in the heart of Coral Gables. I'd been going there for years
to browse and dream. This time, however I walked right up to New Fiction,
pulled THE PARDON off the shelf and plopped it on the counter.
"That's my book, you know," I told the sales clerk.
She looked at me quizzically. "Yes, it is once you've paid for
it."
Part of me wanted to pull out my drivers license, tell her to compare
the names, and insist NO, REALLY --- IT'S MY BOOK, I WROTE THIS THING!
Instead, I just chuckled to myself and paid her in cash. "Best
twenty-three dollars I've ever spent," I said.
She pointed with a nod to the book on the counter. "James Gri .
. . Grippa . . . Grippa-na-nando. Never heard of him. Any good?"
"No," I said. "Just lucky."
© 2005 James Grippando
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After twelve years as a Miami trial lawyer, James
Grippando is now a national best-selling author of suspenseful thrillers.
GOT THE LOOK, his tenth novel in eleven years and No. 5 in the Jack
Swyteck series, will be published by HarperCollins in 2006. James's
novels are enjoyed worldwide in nineteen languages.
[Editor's
note: This article first appeared in Mystery
Scene Magazine, Summer Issue, No. 85, 2004.]
By Brian Garfield
[Editor's note: In 1994, John Grisham revealed to
NEWSWEEK that he credited the following article by Brian Garfield
with giving him the tools to create his ground-breaking thriller, THE
FIRM , as well as subsequent books. Garfield himself is a noted bestselling
novelist, as well as a screenwriter, producer, and nonfiction writer.
He won the Edgar Award for HOPSCOTCH, which was made into the prize-winning
movie of the same name, starring Walter Matthau and Glenda Jackson.
For more of this renowned author's credits, please see his bio
at the end of this article.]
The English call
them thrillers, and in our clumsier way we call them novels of
suspense.
They contain elements of mystery, romance and adventure, but they don't
fall into restrictive categories. And they're not circumscribed by artificial
systems of rules like those that govern the whodunit or the gothic romance.
The field is wide enough to include Alistair MacLean, Allen Drury,
Helen Maclnnes, Robert Crichton, Graham Greene, and Donald E. Westlake.
(Now there's a parlay.) The market is not limited by the stigmata of
genre labels, and therefore the potential for success of a novel in
this field is unrestricted: DAY OF THE JACKAL, for instance, was
a first novel.
The game's object: To perch the reader on edge ---
to keep him flipping pages to find out what's going to happen next.
The game's rules are harder to define; they are few, and these are
elastic. The seasoned professional learns the rules mainly in order
to know how to break them to good effect.
But such as they are, the rules can be defined as follows.
Start with action; explain it later.
This is an extension of Raymond Chandler's famous dictum: When things
slow down, bring in a man with a gun. To encourage the reader to turn
to page 2, give him something on page 1--conflict, trouble, fear, violence.
I realize you've got a lot of background that needs to be established,
leading up to the first moments of overt conflict, but you can establish
all that in chapter 2. Flash back to it if you need to. But in
Chapter 1, get the show on the road.
Make it tough for your protagonist.
Give him a worthy antagonist and make things look hopeless. Don't drop
convenient solutions in his lap. The tougher the opposition, the more
everything is stacked against the protagonist, the better.
Plant it early; pay it off later.
Don't bring in new characters or facts at the end to help solve the
protagonist's dilemma. He must work out his own solution based on a
conflict that's established early in the story.
No cavalry to the rescue, and no sudden unearthing of a revealing letter
written before he died by a character who was dispatched way back in
Chapter 3. (Unless, of course, you established in Chapter 4 that
such a letter exists, and followed that revelation with a race between
the protagonist and his enemies to see who'll get the letter first.)
No cavalry to the rescue.
Give the protagonist the initiative.
All good dramatic writing centers on conflict --- interior (alcoholism,
oedipal conflicts) or exterior (a dangerous enemy, an alien secret police
force). Only in poor gothic fiction is the protagonist habitually and
tearfully and hand-wringingly at the mercy of evil opposing forces that
push him or her around at will.
The best story is usually that in which the protagonist takes active
steps to achieve a goal against impossible odds, or to prevent opposing
forces from overcoming him or his loved ones. The protagonist may begin
by reacting, but in the end he must act from his own initiative.
Give the protagonist a personal stake.
No longer is it acceptable for the hero to solve a mystery just because
it presents an interesting puzzle. The more intimate his involvement
in the main conflict of the story, the better.
He himself, or his aims, should be in jeopardy: His own life or those
of his loved ones should be in danger, or his best friend has been murdered,
or he is the kind of character whose values and principles won't let
him sit by and allow injustice to destroy people around him.
Whatever the conflict is, if he loses, it's going to cost him horribly;
that's the essence.
Give the protagonist a tight time limit, and then shorten it.
This doesn't always work because the logic of many stories prohibits
it; don't use it unless you can work it in believably. But when time
is a factor, and when the brief span of time in which the hero must
resolve the conflict is then shortened, you have gone a long way toward
heightening the suspense.
Choose your character according to your own capacities, as
well as his.
Don't use as your protagonist an accomplished professional spy unless
you are prepared to do the research and groundwork necessary to create
such a character convincingly. It is better, particularly when approaching
the early stages of your own professionalism, to stick to the familiar.
Some of the most successful suspense-novel protagonists --- many
of Eric Ambler's, for instance --- are ordinary innocent people
caught up in dangerous webs. The indignant honest idealist makes a good
protagonist because his innocence makes the professional opposition
all the more frightening. Yet a plot-structure for this character is
often difficult to contrive because, in spite of his naiveté,
he has to be clever and resourceful enough (not lucky) to prevail over
his awesome enemies.
The other face of this coin, of course, is the professional-crook-as-protagonist;
he's easy to identify with because he's an outcast, an underdog, one
man using his wits to survive against society's oppressive machinery.
But the pitfalls of this genre are treacherous, and unless you know
criminal procedure and feel comfortable competing with Anthony Burgess
and Richard Stark, it's better to avoid the crook-hero in the beginning.
Know your destination before you set out.
The prevailing weakness of many suspense stories that are otherwise
successful is the letdown the reader experiences at the end ---
the illogical and disappointing anticlimax. It isn't enough to set up
intriguing conflicts and obey all the other rules if you haven't got
an ending that fulfills the promise of the preceding chapters.
It becomes disgustingly obvious when a writer has confronted his hero
with thrilling obstacles only to paint himself into a corner. Presented
with his own unsolvable cliffhanger, he is reduced to bringing in deus
ex machina to solve the hero's problems for him.
It isn't necessary to tie up all loose ends, but the climax should
resolve the principal conflict one way or another. (In recent years,
to avoid the traditional clichés of virtue-triumphant or ironic-downfall,
several talented novelists have resorted to obscure endings that no
reader could possibly decipher. I rather hope the fad is dying out;
whatever the reasons behind it, it demonstrates lazy thinking and infuriates
the reader.)
The best key to a good ending is to know what the ending will be before
you start writing the book.
Whether you write a preliminary outline or not, you should know where
the journey will end, and how.
Don't rush in where angels fear to tread.
I admit this one is a catchall. Essentially I mean that it is wise
to observe not only what the pros do, but also what they avoid doing.
The best writers do not jump on bandwagons; they build new ones.
The pro doesn't write a caper novel about the world's biggest heist
unless he's convinced he can write an unusual story with a unique and
important twist. Otherwise he risks unfavorable comparison with the
classics in that subgenre. "Why bother with it if it's not as taut as
Rififi and not as funny as The Hot Rock?"
Yet this should not be taken to mean every writer must obey faddish
advice, such as "Spy fiction is dead," or "Historical novels are out
this season." There is no such thing as a dead genre because the human
imagination is limitless, and there is never a dearth of new ideas,
new twists, new talents.
The question is, "Is this idea strong enough and important enough to
make the story sufficiently different from its predecessors to merit
publication?" If a novel is good enough, it will find a publisher whether
it is a hard-boiled detective story, a western, a spy novel, a historical
adventure, or a novel about bug-eyed monsters from Mars. If it isn't
good enough, the publisher may reject it by saying that such novels
are out of style, but this is merely a euphemism.
Don't write anything you wouldn't want to read.
This one sounds self-evident, but I've met several young writers who
decided they wanted to start out by hacking their way through gothics
or westerns, just to learn the ropes, because those categories looked
easy to imitate. Nuts. I f you start out that way, you'll end
up a hack.
Now if you like to read westerns, then write a western. But don't write
into a genre for which you have contempt. If you don't like gothics
but insist on writing one, your contempt will show; you can't hide it.
I don't say you can't sell books this way; God knows people do, all
too often. But if you thoroughly enjoy sea stories --- even if
you don't know a thing about nautical life --- you're better off
attempting to write a sea story because you'll go into it with enthusiasm.
© 1973, 1994 Brian Garfield
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The award-winning author of some 60 books, Brian
Garfield was a finalist for the American Book Award for WILD TIMES,
which was the basis for the TV miniseries of the same name.
His seminal thriller DEATH WISH defined a crime-writers' genre and gave
rise to a hit series of action movies starring Charles Bronson.
His nonfiction book THE THOUSAND MILE WAR: WORLD WAR II IN ALASKA
AND THE ALEUTIANS is the definitive history of the only campaign
fought in North America during that war . Among his other novels
are KOLCHAK'S GOLD, RECOIL, and LINE OF SUCCESSION.
[Editor's note: This article was published twice by WRITER'S
DIGEST. Its first appearance was in 1973 in the magazine.
The second was in the 1994 WRITER'S YEARBOOK‹"At last: The real
secret behind John Grisham's success."]
Like many fiction writers, when I began trying to write a novel in the mid 1990s, I had no clear notion of genre, much less something called the thriller genre. Of course I did have a clear notion that THE HUNT FOR RED OCTOBER, which I liked, was quite different from THE CATCHER IN THE RYE, which contained a certain genius that even I could discern but, frankly, nevertheless bored me.
We tend to write the kinds of book we enjoy reading, seeking certain familiar touchstones or landmarks, while investing the story with quirks of place, character, or plot that make the work uniquely our own. What I wrote early on was an odd misfit of a manuscript, about which bewildered publishing house editors could say only the dreaded, "We hope you find a home for it." There were of course mutterings that they couldn't figure out how to place it even if they could bring themselves to like it.
Searching for direction, I was told that, "You need to decide where in the store you would look for your book." Actually, that, too is a bit confusing because thrillers are shelved under numerous categories, and appear in the no-category "general fiction" as well.
At this point I was far from writing a classic thriller although by instinct I continued to try to write a story based on suspense. (I would not have phrased my efforts as "suspense", but a professor of literature advised that I did well with characters who were frightened out of their minds. Suspense books commonly feature such characters, she explained.) At this early stage I remained less-than-blissfully ignorant of genre distinctions. Had you asked me the difference between a mystery and a thriller I would have shrugged.
As I floundered around trying to write something, it dawned on me that some characters are so intriguing that THEY, and not the plot, create the story. Now some of you will harrumph and say that all good fiction requires well-developed characters. Yes, but consider a book where almost nothing happens, and yet it creates a strange and widespread fascination among its readers.
My first experience with such a book was LADDER OF YEARS by Ann Tyler. When the inward intellectual musings of the ivory-tower elite achieve the requisite gravitas to stir wonder akin to childbirth, the book wins a Pulitzer Prize. I've never read a contemporary Pulitzer Prize-winner, and chances are you haven't either. But chances also are that sometime between the age of 6 and your current age, you read a book that you remember to this day simply because of the quality of one of its main characters. Unless you only watched TV, in which case I would call to your attention John Walton if you're older, and Seinfeld if you're younger.
When I realized the potential value of a one-of-a-kind lead character, my next problem with a character-driven story was that I didn't think I could write one. Just going through a personalized list of favorite character-driven novels can be as depressing as it is inspiring: Think of a brilliant literary/mainstream novel (ONE FLEW OVER THE CUCKOO'S NEST), a literary-quality historical novel (LONESOME DOVE), a brilliant history/mystery combo (SNOW FALLING ON CEDARS), a literary mystery (MYSTIC RIVER), a romance for the ages (BRIDGES OF MADISON COUNTY or THE NOTEBOOK), an espionage thriller (THE BOURNE IDENTITY or THE DAY OF THE JACKAL), a serial-killer thriller (RED DRAGON), a legal thriller (THE FIRM or PRESUMED INNOCENT), and of course the list goes on. It was a sad day when I realized I had to choose a 'genre' myself.
Please don't misunderstand me: I don't mean that every author has to choose among genres --- your work depends on your natural talent, taste, experience, and will, in a profession with a full complement of aspirants for relatively few slots for literary work, and not so many for thrillers.
If you haven't got my drift: It's tough to get a job in the novel-writing business, and sometimes you take what you can write.
The more perceptive among you have now figured out that in part I'm going to tell you what a thriller is by telling you what it is not. Funny --- that's how I began learning.
As I wandered through my fog of genre uncertainty, I began to focus on those so-called popular writers associated with the thriller genre who had a wonderful talent for writing a character. Thomas Harris with his character Hannibal Lecter in RED DRAGON and SILENCE OF THE LAMBS came to the fore, as he has for many novelists who admire the creation of his cunning, intellectual, sociopath.
Two characters in particular from Dean Koontz's FROM THE CORNER OF HIS EYE stand out for me. Both Junior, the murderer, and Vanadium, the detective, were brilliantly executed and were major elements of the story. As Vanadium plays with Junior's mind, the suspense crackles, and for some God-awful reason we find little people sitting on the back bleachers of our minds rooting for a psychopath. This particular thriller is a tour-de-force of character development, but the plot, I believe, moves more slowly than some other Koontz books --- INTENSITY, for example.
Character is a critical element in many popular works of suspense, but usually the development of character is done in such a way that it magnifies or helps to create the suspense. Others would say that the thriller simply examines character in the crucible of extreme stress more than it USES character for suspense. I'll leave it to you to sort out the semantics. Either way, clearly many of us try to create characters who will enhance the nail-biting aspects of our stories. The methods by which this is accomplished are myriad.
Many classic character pieces in modern literature help us ponder some neurosis, common or strange --- a deep angst in a dark soul. The point is an exploration of human nature, not the creation of suspense per se. This can work in a thriller (think SMILLA'S SENSE OF SNOW by Peter Hoeg, or the Arkady Renko novels by Martin Cruz Smith), but personally I do not usually make time to consider such deeper meanings in connection with my fiction reading because I'm too busy contemplating something like what really is hidden on Plum Island (I'm not actually accusing Nelson DeMille of writing a thriller here) or whether Dr. David Beck will ever be reunited with his seemingly dead wife, the utter and complete love of his life, in Harlan Coben's TELL NO ONE.
I know some of you will tell me that your favorite thriller characters are every bit as profound as literary characters. A rather famous thriller writer commented that there was no such thing as literary fiction, there was just good and bad fiction, and all the rest was only an excuse for making no money.
I don't know about that; I only know that in thriller stories we don't seem to spend nearly as much time exploring a character's quiet desperation over ordinary things or their meaning, or the character's compulsions and the consequences. In a thriller, when we authors treat readers to a display of a character's insanity, I think we're using it as a device to put readers ever closer to the edges of their seat rather than create a personal epiphany about life or its meaning.
And yet the main characters remain vital. How can we care about someone's peril if we care nothing for them? So goes the truism that has by now become trite. A good story is always made better if the characters grow or change as opposed to merely surviving or winning the race.
So my thesis is that in thrillers we use character development to heighten suspense and make the story more compelling although admittedly we may serve reader interest in other ways as well.
In a thriller, first and foremost, we want a sense of purposeful evil pouring from the antagonist, because the antagonist must drive the story. If the villain has a semi-understandable rationale, enabling a certain degree of empathy from readers, so much the better. The villain's credibility creates interest in readers, enhancing the impact of his or her deeds. And it's only against this negative "value" (by value I mean quantity and magnitude) that the protagonist's positive value can be tested and admired. And of course seeing the blackness of the heart helps advance the suspense. In some cases the nature of the evil is heartless detachment, and in others malevolence, or sometimes both in generous measure.
A softer form of evil comes from gross negligence fueled by blind ambition (Michael Crichton's John Hammond in JURASSIC PARK). Some of the all-time great evil characters include individuals like Hannibal Lecter or groups of people such as the old Soviet empire and its various agents (DeMille's THE CHARM SCHOOL). Never forget to consider giving evil characters a good side or the left-over shadows of a better life. It makes them more interesting.
In some thrillers the evil force may be a natural phenomenon, like a disease, beast, or natural disaster. Take for instance Tess Gerritsen's GRAVITY about a wicked little microbe locked inside a space capsule. How's that for claustrophobic terror? Such black spawn of mother nature or man's invention can accomplish terrible results, but it always serves the novel for the author to put a human face in, on, or around such nebulous threats that normally exist only as a vague apprehension in our minds. The combination of these natural horrors, as heartless as a psychopath with no comprehension of evil or remorse, and human villains who know better, can be potent indeed.
Good thrillers also create lovable or noble characters or very human characters so that we will sweat over their peril --- and of course we tend to lose a sympathetic character to unfortunate and often violent death here and there in order to keep readers profoundly worried about the survivors. Romantic attachments help as well. It's necessary, even if there's a mass threat, that readers live the story through a few surrogates for the general population to make the threat and consequences feel real (Stephen King's classic THE STAND comes to mind). If the surrogates are depicted as flesh-and-blood human beings, we can't help but imagine ourselves facing the same terrible dangers they do.
By now I'm sure you get the idea that good crisp character development in a thriller enhances suspense and makes a page-turning plot even more of a page-turner. TELL NO ONE was a masterpiece in this sense. In the beginning of the book, as I sat through Coben's exposition of the wonderfully altruistic doctor who tended the poor and had not a prejudicial bone in his body, I thought: "Harlan Coben's just trying to make me like this guy so that I'll be worried about whatever worries him and root for him." Guess what? It worked like gangbusters. Character development boosted the suspense even though I saw Coben playing with my mind.
There is always a balance between keeping the action moving and using editorial comment to describe a character for the reader. In thriller fiction it is wise to pick your spots for character information. The writer needs to make certain it doesn't hurt the reader's sense of urgency.
A long talk about the meaning of life can be like intellectual Valium, so that the book no longer feels compelling and instead becomes constipated. The masters of the art can slow the pace and grip us with various action antecedents, and for most of us this is the pinnacle of the art of the thriller. Hallowed are the steps of the writer who can slow the action and increase his grip on our adrenal glands. Nelson DeMille does it as well as anyone.
The most artful way to develop a character is through action (what the character does), next dialogue, and last by the author telling us so. It has been said that we learn the most about people by their deeds. Fiction is no different.
Often though, skilled writers will take a shortcut with a few journalistic paragraphs about character as opposed to exposing us to an entire scene with all of the attendant sights, odors, and visual effects. In the hands of an amateur, this fails; in the hands of a master, who's chosen just the right detail (akin to Gustave Flaubert's famous mot juste, it soars. We are told, for instance, not shown, that Hannibal Lecter plucked out a nurse's eye. This macabre detail is rendered up as a point of history before Clarice pays her first visit, at which point Hannibal's opening words to Clarice grab and rip like steel talons, the dialogue seasoned by our memory of Lecter's hideous act. That stark contrast between Lecter's deeds and his urbane conversation is thriller magic.
A few authors are virtuosos at maintaining suspense through fairly long scenes. If you're a beginning thriller writer, please know that the key isn't writing shorter scenes. It's making maximum use of each one. Any scene in a commercial thriller novel must serve many masters: delivery of exposition and key background information; creation of mood, atmosphere, and setting; character interaction and development; and plot movement. For a thriller writer, the pharaoh of those masters is building and maintaining suspense.
If you're an inexperienced scene-writer, it's all too easy to erect unintentional obstacles between readers and the swift movement and inherent 'pull' of your scenes. One, which many of us have to learn the hard way, is the use of 'point of view.'
When I wrote my first two novels, I had no knowledge of this concept. I knew that all my characters HAD a point of view, and I wasn't hesitant in the least to express several at once in any given scene. You can imagine my shock when someone suggested I perhaps ought to try writing each scene from just one character's viewpoint. I mean, like, doesn't a reader need to know what every character is thinking all the time?
It was a real hassle rewriting 400-plus pages twice, making each scene unfold from a particular point of view. If you don't know what I'm talking about, don't worry, you're just about as ignorant as I was, and I more or less got over it. Many wise words have been written on the subject: Seek them out.
Now why, you might ask, did I start out writing about genre and thrillers and then switch to characters and finally point of view. It's because decisions about point of view are critical to character development. It is easier to give the reader information about a character's psyche using first-person narration, but it can be a bit of a handicap creating suspense because there is no looking ahead around the corner at what the evil characters are planning for the hero.
The thriller genre tends to generate books with multiple points of view, and THAT would be because we gain benefits by letting readers know what the bad guys are doing that mystery writers don't. Mysteries are almost invariably told only from the hero or heroine's viewpoint. First-person-narrated thrillers occur, but they're an exception. One fine example is TELL NO ONE, wherein we get to know Dr. Beck through his first-person voice while we experience the evil characters in third person --- all in the same novel.
In a third-person thriller, the reader is given a big-picture view from above the fray, watching all of it unfold. In classic mysteries the reader tends to follow the protagonist, learning what the hero learns when he learns it. In a mystery we struggle with the riddle just as our hero does. Thrillers, however, may depend upon a central mystery, just as a mystery novel does, but the mystery in a thriller is usually overshadowed by the footrace. We're panting through those pages not to see who dunnit, but who will win. One of the suspense-building factors to this is a peek just ahead around the corner before our character arrives there. Do we ever dread that ambush that's waiting for him.
One of the most interesting ways to develop character is through the setting. For example we can describe a rugged outdoor setting and then note that our character is like the place we described perhaps because he lives in it or visits it often and it suits him. Often just a few words combined with a strong sense of a place will tell us volumes about a character. The beauty of the indirect approach is that it seems effortless and natural to the reader --- if it is done well.
Finally things can take on the qualities of a character. Clive Cussler does that with ships. He was one of the early writers to discern the mystery of the TITANIC (RAISING THE TITANIC). Can you feel the sense in which that ship has become a character through all that has been written? The ship's name itself drips images and feelings of opulence, of arrogance, and of tragedy. It's made an indelible impression just like any great character in fiction.
Suspense that compels the reader to continue reading is the lynchpin of a good thriller. Creating memorable characters enhances readers' interest, invests them in the outcome, and is part of the panoply of devices in the writers tool box to seal the readers' devotion to the race and its outcome.
© 2005 David Dun
A practicing attorney, David Dun is the bestselling author of NECESSARY EVIL, AT THE EDGE, OVERFALL, UNACCEPTABLE RISK, and the forthcoming THE BLACK SILENT. His high-action adventure thrillers take place largely in the Pacific Northwest and are steeped in cutting-edge science.
By Richard Curtis
For many publishing people, the world as they had known it ended in
the summer of 1996. On a warm brilliant day I sat down at a table in
a Spanish restaurant for what I thought would be a typical lunch with
the publisher of a mass-market paperback company. I found him slumped
head in hands over a seriously stiff drink. "What's the
matter?"
He looked up, miserable. "You haven't heard? The wholesale
independent distribution business is imploding. Hundreds and hundreds
of drivers have been let go."
I groaned, beckoned to the waiter and pointed to my friend's glass.
"I'll have the same."
The collapse of the distribution system that fueled the mass-market
paperback revolution was a trauma from which the book industry has not
recovered to this day. To appreciate its impact requires a brief description
of the way books were distributed after the post-World War II paperback
revolution that swept the U.S. publishing industry.
By long tradition, trade or general interest hardcover books have been
offered to bookstore buyers by publishers' sales representatives.
The store buyers select which titles they order and the number of copies
they will stock in their stores. Though released year-round, hardcovers
are offered on a seasonal basis in publishers' catalogues, which
are issued several times annually. Whatever the reality may be, the
theory is that they will have a decent shelf life and, if popular, remain
on display for months or longer. This business model has not changed
fundamentally from the last century to the present time.
Mass-market paperbacks (as opposed to the larger trade paperback format)
are a very different matter. Introduced in 1939, "pocket books"
took hold in the '50s and '60s, but publishers soon realized
that the hardcover distribution approach didn't work. They needed
a different sales model and turned to the one used for magazines.
Every month, magazines were shipped to depots "agencies"
around the country. Drivers picked up the magazines at the agencies
and visited stores on pre-assigned routes in towns and cities. Most
of the stores were not bookshops but rather supermarkets, candy stores,
newspaper stands, and bus, train or airport terminals. Each month, these
salaried employees collected the previous month's unsold publications
and replaced them on the store's racks and shelves with new stock.
To paperback book publishers, this existing distribution network was
the perfect vehicle for delivering their product to a far-flung readership.
Thus it came to pass that paperbacks began hitching rides with magazines.
And that too is how they came to be released on a monthly schedule.
After 1956, when the leading magazine wholesaler went out of business,
a number of entrepreneurs set up shop as independent wholesale distributors
("ID's" or "rack jobbers"), handling mostly
books.
Because they were a monthly phenomenon, paperbacks did not enjoy a long
shelf life; the exigencies of returning paperbacks, when the distributor
cleared the racks to make room for the next month's releases,
made for an ephemeral existence. What is more, the unsold copies were
usually not redistributed or remaindered. Because paperback publishers
had to pay freight for returned copies, many of which were dirty or
damaged, the stores found it more efficient simply to strip the covers
off the unsold books, send the insides to be pulped, and return only
the covers to the publishers for credit when settling accounts.
Since paperbacks were returnable, distributors delayed paying publishers
until unsold stock was returned. To account to authors for the gap between
copies sold and royalties released, the paperback publishers took a
page from the creative accounting systems devised by the hardcover industry,
holding large amounts of royalties for long periods until returns were
finalized. Royalty reports to authors were deliberately fashioned to
omit information about the number of copies printed, shipped, and returned,
or about the amounts of royalty reserved pending finalization of returns.
This suppressing of vital sales data gave publishers carte blanche to
retain royalties that might have been remitted to authors. Some publishers
got too creative and held royalties forever. Until the 1990s, when pressure
from agents and from writers' organizations forced publishers
to reveal significant details, mass-market houses reported only net
sales with no information as to how they arrived at those net figures.
As I wrote at the time, it was like reporting batting averages to baseball
fans without revealing how many at-bats or hits the players had had.
The Paperback Industry Blossoms
Unlike retailers of hardcover books, paperback booksellers seldom had
much say over which titles were stocked on their racks. They passively
received the current month's selection and passively watched the
unsold stock loaded into the distributor's vehicle a month later.
The authors of those books watched the process too, but some of them
figured out ways to influence the wholesalers to promote their books.
A number of leading authors, on their own initiative or sponsored by
their publishers, began visiting the wholesale agencies and pitching
their books at executives and ingratiating themselves with the jobbers.
Some of the more energetic writers went so far as to drop in on drivers
as they loaded their vehicles, bringing coffee and donuts and promotional
material to inspire them. This technique was particularly successful
with romance fiction, which sold most abundantly in the supermarkets
that women visited two or three times every week. It did not hurt if
the authors were attractive. Many a lovestruck driver stocked extra
copies of a title after a pretty novelist shared a pre-dawn breakfast
with him on the tailgate of his station wagon.
Although a growing number of traditional bookstores stocked mass-market
paperbacks, it was the wholesale distribution network that fueled the
huge growth of the book business in the last quarter of the twentieth
century, spawning a thriving industry and a generation of bestselling
authors. Even when those authors graduated to hardbacks, paperback reprints
of their books drove sales overall. In the late 1980s and early '90s,
mass-market paperback revenue made the difference between feast and
famine for hardcover publishers. Income from romance fiction alone contributed
25% of the cash flowing into the trade book industry.
Smart publishing executives recognized how heavily they depended on
mass-market income for their profits. But that message did not always
filter down to their editors. Many of them, possessing only a hazy idea
of where the money for their acquisitions came from, spent profligately
and ended up taking a bath on books and authors that flopped miserably.
Or they simply acquired whatever they pleased without giving much thought
to the bottom line, failing to realize that they were indulging in a
luxury largely subsidized by paperback book revenue. Many lived in denial
that their beloved first novels, short story collections, poetry anthologies
and other elevated forms of literary endeavor were financed by romances,
westerns, thrillers, horror novels and space operas.
Efficiency Strikes the Distribution Business
Meanwhile, the infrastructure of paperback book distribution was undergoing
significant changes. The dramatic rise and expansion of bookstore chains
like Barnes & Noble siphoned business away from wholesalers'
franchises, both in cities and suburban malls. Computerized sales information
enabled publishers, wholesalers and retailers to better track the performance
of categories and identify winners and losers among specific books and
authors. And the stunning advent of amazon.com leveraged the awesome
power of the Internet to link supply and demand.
Assessing these patterns, paperback distributors began asking themselves
why they needed to employ human labor when they could more efficiently
and economically service bookstores and other outlets by shipping books
directly to the retailers. Yes, it would mean that the human element
-- the guy in the station wagon who knew which towns loved historical
romances and which preferred contemporary ones, which adored westerns
and which were big on science fiction would be removed from
the equation. But -- well, that was progress!
The big agencies pulled the plug in that summer of 1996 when whole fleets
of drivers were discharged, and in the following years the wholesale
distribution workforce was reduced to a fraction of what it had been
in its heyday.
The Bottom Drops Out
Most publishing executives were slow to recognize the implications of
the nosedive in the wholesale paperback distribution business, dismissing
it as one of those occasional and inevitable shifts to which the industry
had always adapted. What was the big deal? Fewer romances and other
genre novels would be published, wasn't that all there was to
it?
In fact, the consequences were nothing short of calamitous. The impact
was felt in every sector of the publishing business, from what got written
to what got published to what got read. It wasn't long before
customers in west Texas or Nebraska or South Carolina discovered that
many books by their favorite authors were no longer being stocked in
their local stores. When customers or store owners complained, they
were told to take it up with the distributor in Vancouver or
some other far-flung location reachable only by an 800 phone number.
The Rise of the Airport Model
A key result of the shift in distribution patterns was the streamlining
of the way retailers ordered books from publishers. Why pick and choose
among thousands of titles that might sell only a handful of copies?
Wasn't it better to follow the formula that worked so well at
airports, ordering only the top fifteen or twenty bestselling books
by branded authors like Nora Roberts, Robert Ludlum, John Grisham and
Stephen King?
As paperback publishers awoke to the new buying patterns, they were
forced to choose between star authors and those whose sales performance
fell below a minimum level. At first the triaging was restricted to
marginal genres like westerns, but as the last decade of the twentieth
century progressed the definition of "marginal" broadened
to embrace every category of book that fell below an ever-stricter definition
of commerciality, a process akin to the lowering of the bar in a limbo
dance. Limbo indeed: authors who had made a living for years from sales
of ten or fifteen thousand copies of their paperbacks were now being
dropped by their publishers as the minimum sales quota increased to
twenty or thirty thousand copies or more.
Like the men and women who distributed their books, a lot of authors
were thrown out of work, and the grim truth finally dawned on publishing
executives. It wasn't just genre titles that were affected by
the seismic shift in book distribution; paperbacks of every kind were
being hit by the pullback.
"What's the Author's Platform?"
As the publishing industry entered the twenty-first century, book industry
executives began requiring editors to produce elaborate profit and loss
projections and other corporate-style analyses of the potential viability
of books and authors. What was the sales performance of previous books?
Did they "sell through" satisfactorily or did returns cross
the threshold of unprofitability according to the latest formulas devised
by bookstore chain number-crunchers? The mantra of "The Bottom
Line" was invoked ad nauseam at every editorial committee, and
editors were constantly reminded, "We can only afford to publish
hits. If you can't project a big profit on a book, turn it down."
Editorial financial projections were aided by an Orwellian innovation
called BookScan, instituted early in 2001 by Nielsen Broadcast Data
Systems, the world's leading provider of airplay tracking information
for the entertainment industry. BookScan offered subscribing publishers
weekly analyses of sales by most major book retailers. Within moments,
editors could access vital sales statistics on previously published
books and authors, elevating performance parameters over traditional
but less quantifiable values like compelling storytelling or stirring
prose.
And what about the author? Was he or she attractive and mediagenic?
Did he or she have a "platform" an organizational
base such as a hit television series or chain of fitness centers capable
of promoting the sale of books? Was the author willing to buy large
quantities of books for giveaway or resale by his or her franchise?
More and more, the importance of traditional literary criteria has taken
a back seat to "The Numbers" and "The Platform."
Promising but modestly successful novelists have discovered they cannot
get their second or third books published, and aspiring newcomers find
that they cannot sell their books at all. As for nonfiction, no matter
how compelling a memoir or business guide or social commentary might
be, publishers are disposed to reject it because the author was not
"branded."
Faced with these grim options, authors have resorted to increasingly
frenzied measures to get published. Established novelists are writing
under pennames to disguise the poor performance of their earlier books,
or strive to produce blockbuster "breakout" novels long
on sex, violence, and plot but short on craft and characterization.
Without supportive publishers to carry them while they developed their
talents over four or five books, new novelists resort to gimmicky concepts
with "log lines" that can be pitched like movie scripts.
Nonfiction authors plump up their credentials or hire public relations
specialists to burnish their images and enhance their media exposure.
Others subsidize the purchase of large quantities of their own books
to drive up their "numbers." Literary agents are besieged
by writers frantically seeking the advantage of representation by successful
dealmakers. Self-publication has soared now that electronic and print
technology and Internet promotion have brought the costs of vanity books
down to proletarian levels.
As much as authors would dearly love to bring back the robust mass-market
paperback era, it's no likelier than a return to steam locomotives.
More and more, the mass-market paperback is becoming a manifestation
of blockbuster publishing, where economies of scale enable publishers
to make a profit on immense shipments despite high returns. Because
retail sales have shifted from racks to bookstores and the Internet,
new and midlist works are increasingly being released in trade paperback.
The shift to trade paperbacks may help save midlist books. A major advantage
of the trade paperback format is that it is the preferred size for print
on demand reprints. "POD" takes all the guesswork out of
bookselling, and the publishing industry can no longer afford to guess
who will buy its products. Dismaying though it may be for old publishing
hands to contemplate, the future of book distribution belongs to print
on demand.
The end of the old mass-market paperback distribution system coincided
with the birth of a new method of delivering books to readers. Though
e-book technology has encountered innumerable obstacles, its potential
to reach a vast readership is no longer seriously disputed. What sort
of literature this new medium produces, and how it will make money for
authors and publishers, are fascinating sources for speculation.
Copyright © 2004 by Richard Curtis.
First published in Backspace,
www.bksp.org
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Richard Curtis,
president of Richard Curtis Associates, Inc., is a leading New York
literary agent and a well-known author advocate. He is also the author
of numerous works of fiction and nonfiction including several books
about the publishing industry. His interest in emerging media and technology
has enabled him to help authors anticipate trends in publishing and
multimedia. He has lectured extensively and conducted panels and seminars
devoted to raising consciousness in the author and agent community about
the future of communications. He was the first president of the Independent
Literary Agents Association and subsequently president of ILAA's
successor organization, the Association of Authors' Representatives.
His firm served for over a decade as agency for the Science Fiction
Writers of America. He is married to author Leslie Tonner and has two
children. He currently resides in Manhattan. His hobbies are sports,
music and painting.
By Peter Blauner
A writer's always hustling somebody. I was teaching a workshop last year at a program for people just out of prison. Not for entirely altruistic reasons, of course‹ I was doing research for a novel. It seemed like a fair deal, though. They were getting the benefit of whatever paltry wisdom I'd collected in publishing five suspense novels, and I was getting the benefit of whatever they knew about breaking the law.
Things started off promisingly. The student body included crack dealers, stickup kids, car thieves, beat-down experts, and I think a murderer or two (it was considered GAUCHE to inquire too specifically after someone's conviction). In any event, they were all there as volunteers and presumably all had some serious interest in learning how to write.
Just their casual conversation before class was a crime writer's treasure trove of street slang and incidental detail. Marijuana was "trees" (as in "we moved some trees off that corner"), police officers were "Jake," guns were "gats" (a touch of forties nostalgia perhaps). But as soon as they put pen to paper, all the accidental poetry and excitement of thug life died away.
There was no mystery or atmosphere, no grip and release of tension. Largely because I'd forgotten to say two words before I gave the assignment to describe what they'd done the night before.
NO RAP.
Now don't get me wrong. I like a lot of hip-hop. I like the hardness, I like the rhythm, I like the fact that each word has the weight of a brick about to be tossed through a window, that people like Eminem or Nas can slip three jokes into one line, that the sonic vocabulary of the music is wide open to everything from cell phone rings to snatches from the original Broadway cast album of ANNIE.
But one after another, the eight men and two women in the group took what should have been heart-stopping narratives of frightening authentic experience and crushed the life out of them with the most egregious clichés of the genre. Instead of the emotion and close observation I'd been hearing a few minutes before, there were lame rhyming insults and boasts about "nines" and "bitches" and "you'll be bowing down when you see me playing the Garden."
"Can I ask you something?" I tried to be tactful. "You guys are writing about all this gunplay, and violence and sexual betrayal..."
"You got a problem with that?" said a bright kid near me named James, with hair bellowing from the sides of his backwards baseball cap like steam and jeans slung so low that the ass pockets were on the backs of his knees
"I don't have a problem with any of that. I'm not your parent or parole officer. The problem I have is that the way you did it is kind of, uh ... BORING."
"Whaddaya mean?"
I tried going back to the old Alfred Hitchcock distinction between surprise and suspense, pretty much the Pledge of Allegiance for most old-school thriller writers. Namely, surprise is an uneventful ten-minute conversation between two men about baseball that ends with a bomb going off. Suspense, however, is the exact same conversation intercut with an awareness of a bomb ticking underneath one man's seat.
James listened carefully, thought about it for a while, and then somberly declared. "I would GLADLY put up with ten minutes of excruciating boredom if the explosion was big enough."
Well, he had me there. It felt like I'd just had a cue ball shoved down my throat. Twenty-five years of painstaking attention to the mechanics of building tension, to the intricacies of character, to the subtlety of language, to gradually stoking and superheating the engine of story-telling all blown to smithereens in a half-second.
"But these raps don't go anywhere as pieces of writing," I tried to argue. "It's just like playing the dozens."
"Exactly!!" He slapped the table in triumph. "Every line is a punch line."
"But then it doesn't add up."
"Are you kidding?" He smirked at the rest of the group, incredulous. "Have you ever actually listened to Jay-Z's lyrics? His shit is totally whack. And he sold like three million records last year."
OH SNAP! In my face. He went and played the money card. Now what was I going to do?
I should've been ready for it, of course. It's not like I'd never encountered the great hungry beast of Instant Gratification. But I just hadn't realized how quick the trigger had gotten. Cell phones, e-mail, fast food and contemporary film and TV editing all militate in favor of giving the people what they want almost before they know they want it. And many thriller writers, including this one on occasion, have tried to keep up. Terse descriptions have gotten terser, chapters shorter, characters' backgrounds simplified,
Probably none of it hurts sales --- as I write, ten of the sixteen books on THE NEW YORK TIMES best-seller list for hardcover fiction are either thrillers or mysteries. But maybe something gets lost in the process. A certain slow patient accretion of nuance and detail to create an atmosphere of true dread. In a way, it's a little bit like what's happened to sex in American movies. There's the occasional fleeting glimpse of nudity and patches of "graphic" dialogue (read: jokes that wouldn't make it on Howard Stern), but it's hard to think of the last genuinely erotic major American film.
When I asked a Hollywood director why that was, he gave me a one word answer. "TIME."
What he meant was that back in those days the sexiest movies were the ones that knew how to stretch out and wait. Scenes were given a chance to breathe and smolder. But all this rushing to "deliver" spoils the mood, though, in thrillers as much as in love stories.
In SILENCE OF THE LAMBS, for one well-known example, the memorable element wasn't that cartoon character Buffalo Bill skinning young women, it was the whisper of intimacy in the long drawn-out dialogue scenes between Clarice and Lecter. And, of course, in the work of the real masters like Graham Greene and John le Carre, it's all about flickering uncertainties and the play of shadow and light.
Unfortunately, my friend with the steam heat hair and the waistband down around his thighs didn't stand a chance of hearing or seeing any of that with all those Jerry Bruckheimer explosions going off. So I tried to coax him into slowing down a little, lowering his pulse rate, checking out the scenery, making like Wordsworth and recollecting in tranquility.
Grudgingly, sullenly, maybe even a bit resentfully, he put his head down and started to write, a look of serene concentration gradually forming on his face as if he'd suddenly turned into an earnest young Julliard student practicing the cello.
Fifteen minutes later, he showed me a draft of a story. A touching little narrative about bitch-slapping his girlfriend's father --- I never said I was there to do social work. The images were starting to come together: He had the pot of rice boiling over on the stove, the long jagged crack in the glass coffee table, the radiator knocking in the corner.
It wasn't perfect, but it had menace, a bit of texture, a hint of individual character, and yes, maybe even some suspense. It was a good start.
I sat back, satisfied, thinking I'd finally gotten traction and diverted him from the habit of going for the quick payoff. A real GOODBYE, MR. CHIPS moment, with class C and D felons. Nothing to it; all in a day's work.
"Maybe you could even think about expanding this into a longer piece," I said.
"Actually," he curled his lip. "I was wondering if you could hook me up with a West Coast agent."
2005 Peter Blauner
Peter Blauner is the author of six novels, including THE INTRUDER, which was a NEW YORK TIMES best-seller, and SLOW MOTION RIOT, which won the 1992 Edgar award for best first novel. His new book, SLIPPING INTO DARKNESS, will be published in January by Little, Brown and Company.
Today, publishers, reviewers, store owners, and even readers
love to organize books into genres. But genres are just cubbyholes where
writers and their stories are judiciously crammed, more out of convenience
than for any artistic reason. It's easier to say 'international
suspense thriller' as opposed to 'a story that involves
unique locales outside the United States where the stakes are high and
the intrigue paramount.'
And this habit may not be all bad. There is something to be said for
brevity.
But this particular genre - the international suspense thriller
- possesses a history that is anything but short.
Though others during the first half of the twentieth century were certainly
writing stories in a similar vein - Graham Greene being a notable
example - Helen MacInnes, a Scottish novelist who started writing
in the late 1930s, moved to the United States and became a citizen,
and continued writing until her death in 1985, may well be the person
who started the modern evolution of the international suspense thriller.
Then the stories were called spy thrillers. But Mrs. MacInnes transformed
them into something altogether different.
Her locales were European; her heroes ordinary people; her villains
either Nazis, Communists, or some other form of worldwide conspiracy.
Her plots were strangely prophetic, since she wrote of organized world
terrorism long before that evil became a clear reality. Her titles were
alluring: THE SALZBURG CONNECTION, THE VENETIAN AFFAIR, NORTH FROM ROME,
SNARE OF THE HUNTER.
We know a great deal about her because her personal papers are on file
at Princeton University. Included within that cache are hundreds of
fan letters which complimented her weaving of travel, history, and nostalgia
into the convoluted plots. An exchange of letters between Mrs. MacInnes
and the director of the Swiss Tourist Bureau revealed the positive affect
her novels had on European tourism. American reviews of her books (from
the 1950s) described her suspense thrillers as "travelogues"
and "Baedekers." Her United States publisher, Harcourt Brace
and World, actively encouraged her to include European tourist destinations
in her plots so as to promote sales. She obliged.
And the technique worked.
Nearly all of Helen MacInnes's books appeared as NEW YORK TIMES
bestsellers. Through her the international suspense thriller, as we
know it today, began to form.
But shaping that form fell to others.
Robert Ludlum burst onto the scene in 1971 with THE SCARLATTI INHERITANCE.
Frederick Forsyth came the same year with THE DAY OF THE JACKAL. Clive
Cussler emerged in 1973 with THE MEDITERRANEAN CAPER, and Ken Follett
made his debut in 1978 with THE EYE OF THE NEEDLE.
These four writers were then not the mega-sellers they are today. Instead,
they were fledgling craftsmen, anxious to see if a publisher or a readership
would care about their stories. Luckily for us their vision proved correct.
Combined, their works have spent countless weeks on every bestseller
list that exists, and they have sold hundreds of millions of copies.
Their careers have been long and varied, and each managed to survive
an ever-changing political world. And make no mistake, the realm of
the international suspense thriller is intricately linked to the real
world. Any writer of the genre knows that the closer the fiction can
be merged with reality, the better the story.
The decade from 1975 to 1985 was significant to the international suspense
thriller. The Cold War provided enormous fodder and the lingering remnants
of Nazi Germany still held a fascination. Both subjects can be found
in abundance within countless novels. A cursory examination of THE NEW
YORK TIMES bestseller lists from that decade reveals at least one international
suspense thriller in the top ten for nearly every week.
Without question, it was a golden age for the genre.
Then the Berlin Wall fell, the Iron Curtain dropped, the Soviet Union
dissolved, and the Cold War ended. So fast in fact did the unraveling
occur that international suspense novelists actually tried to keep that
conflict alive a few more years within their fiction. But by the early
1990s, storylines had thinned. Writers tried to replace the genre's
bread and butter with the Middle East, international assassins, and
bio-threats. But the vital link between reality and fiction had disappeared.
Reality took over.
And it was no longer considered suspenseful.
The genre contracted a disease, and publishers quickly recognized its
symptoms and pronounced the malady terminal. Unless you were one of
the solidly established giants of the realm, which translated into a
built-in readership, the chances of breaking in anew were slim. As newspaper
and television did for some aging celebrity when they drafted an obituary
months before the actual death, editors crafted the death notice for
the international suspense thriller by turning their attention to other
genres.
The legal thriller rose to prominence. Scott Turow whetted the public's
appetite in 1987 with PRESUMED INNOCENT. But a country lawyer from Oxford,
Mississippi became king with THE FIRM (1991). John Grisham went on,
during the 1990s, to sell more books than any other working writer.
The techno-thriller was born thanks to the imagination of an insurance
salesman who wrote a book in his spare time and managed to snag the
attention of President Ronald Reagan. THE HUNT FOR RED OCTOBER (1984)
launched not only Tom Clancy's career but the genre itself.
Dale Brown inaugurated the military thriller. The medical thriller matured
through Robin Cook, Michael Palmer, and Tess Gerritsen. The financial
thriller evolved through authors such as Stephen Frey and Christopher
Reich.
Meanwhile, the international suspense thriller, the darling of the 1970s
and 80s, only languished.
That is not to say new writers weren't able to launch careers
during this time or continue successfully within the genre. Some in
fact did. John Case, Robert Cullen, Jack DuBrul, Daniel Easterman, David
Hagberg, Robert Harris, Joseph Kanon, John le Carré, Gayle Lynds,
Glenn Meade, David Morrell, James Rollins, Justin Scott, and Daniel
Silva, to name only a few.
Still, for most of the unlucky souls who submitted international suspense
thrillers for publication from 1992 to 2002, the standard response came
in unison: SORRY, AT THE MOMENT, THIS DOES NOT FIT OUR LIST. What should
have been added was the proviso: AND IT'S NEVER GOING TO FIT UNTIL
SOMETHING DRAMATICALLY CHANGES.
And that change came on March 18, 2003.
The book that went on sale that day was from a relatively obscure thriller
writer, Dan Brown, who'd managed to publish his first international
suspense thriller in 1998. He did it again in 2000 and 2001. But those
three earlier books barely garnered minimal reviews and sold only modestly.
Few noticed them.
His fourth manuscript was different. The story touched sensitive nerves
and forced the reader to confront conclusions that, in their uniqueness
and logic, were startling. Not that the novel was true, or even purported
to be actual history (remember it is fiction), or that it was even unique
(Katherine Neville blazed the trail for books in a similar vein long
before with her ingenious THE EIGHT in 1988 and then again in 1998 with
THE MAGIC CIRCLE). Instead, the story dared to challenge sacred beliefs
in a fresh and entertaining manner.
And readers loved it.
Even the title was intriguing .
THE DAVINCI CODE.
The book immediately climbed to #1 on every bestseller list and started
leaving shelves not in increments of thousands, but millions. Even in
2005, two years after publication, the book remains at the top of THE
NEW YORK TIMES bestseller list and its fraternal twin, THE DAVINCI CODE:
SPECIAL ILLUSTRATED EDITION, has now taken its place in the top ten,
too. The publishing run for THE DAVINCI CODE is unmatched. Approaching
twenty million books worldwide, no other hardcover fiction has performed
as well. Also, those first three obscure thrillers, DIGITAL FORTRESS,
ANGELS & DEMONS, and DECEPTION POINT, have joined their sibling
on the bestseller lists, selling millions of new editions.
Yet the effect of THE DAVINCI CODE started long before March 2003, and
I'm an example of the good fortune that book brought.
From 1997 until 2002, my agent, Pam Ahearn, submitted five of my international
suspense thrillers to New York publishing houses. All were rejected
a combined total of 85 times. On the 86th attempt, in April 2002, which
was a resubmission of one of those manuscripts, the right editor, at
the right moment, looking for that kind of story, found me. Why? He
was Mark Tavani at Ballantine Books, which is part of Random House,
and he knew that Doubleday, which is also part of Random House, had
a book in production called THE DAVINCI CODE that seemed destined for
great things.
The prepublication buzz had been phenomenal. Ten thousand advanced readers
copies had been distributed (which by itself is incredible). The excitement
had risen to the point that those same editors, who only a few years
before had sounded the death knell for the international suspense thriller,
were now talking resurrection - looking for books that could ride
the wind they firmly believed was about to start blowing their way.
I was lucky enough to be offered a ticket in May 2002.
Eventually three of the five manuscripts my agent submitted were bought
by Ballantine. It wasn't that the stories had changed; they hadn't.
But as in politics, in publishing timing is everything, too.
And I wasn't alone.
Other writers were given similar opportunities. Three who come directly
to mind are Paul Adam, UNHOLY TRINITY (2000), Ted Bell, HAWKE (2003),
and Raelynn Hillhouse, RIFT ZONE (2004). The genre suddenly sprang back
to life. Even established giants are now hoisting their sails into that
howling wind. John Grisham's latest, THE BROKER, is a radical
departure from his usual legal thriller formula. Doubleday is actively
promoting the book as an international thriller.
So the genre has turned full circle.
Life, then death, then life again.
Such is the way of the world and publishing.
Every few years a writer emerges who actually changes the way things
are done. Jacqueline Susann did this in the 1960s with her innovative
methods of self-promotion and marketing, many of which are standard
practice today. Stephen King regenerated the horror genre in the 1970s
with frightening tales about everyday things. In the 1980s and 1990s,
John Grisham catapulted the legal thriller to mega-prominence.
True, THE DAVINCI CODE has sold millions of books around the globe.
And yes, the paperback will one day sell millions more. And yes, Dan
Brown's next novel, THE SOLOMON KEY, could well eclipse THE DAVINCI
CODE.
But the real contribution of Dan Brown and his marvelously inventive
story will not be sales. It will be the effect that both he and his
publisher had on the international suspense thriller. Together they
breathed life back into something that was all but dead. And, in the
process, opened up opportunities for those of us who were out there
searching for a chance.
© 2004 Steve Berry
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Steve Berry
lives on the Georgia coast with his wife and daughter, where he practices
law and serves on the Camden County Board of Commissioners. His first
two novels, THE AMBER ROOM and THE ROMANOV PROPHECY, were both national
bestsellers. His latest will be THE THIRD SECRET (May 2005). Rights
to Steve's books have been sold in twelve languages.
By Jeffrey Anderson
To capture a science thriller is to smoke a hydra from its swamp
pit. Unlike its cousin the techno-thriller, this stalker of humanity
doesn't reside in glitzy secret government agencies or wear trench coats
lined with high-tech gadgets. A science thriller camouflages itself
in mild-mannered laboratories and among bleached stacks of NSA grants.
This virulent creature may appear to be dead and buried in dusty archives
of a university library. Don't underestimate its malevolence from the
innocence of its lair. A science thriller isn't satisfied with merely
controlling the world ‹ this beast is hell bent on unraveling
the laws of the universe.
To hunt a science thriller, dead or alive, you have to know its behavior,
mating rituals, and sinkholes. A science thriller is not necessarily
engaged in technology; it spends its time probing fundamental concepts
in nature and charting precipices at the ethical frontiers of modern
science. It lives in the intellectual high country where oxygen is sparse
and guides are few. To track a science thriller is to leave everything
you know about the universe at the door and enter a new paradigm where
anything can be questioned, especially the core beliefs about who we
are, where we live, and what we are becoming.
You don't just go out and hunt a science thriller casually. It takes
equipment, supplies, backup. No one person has the means to catch one
single-handedly. They're interdisciplinary beasts with tendrils in genomic
engineering, robotics, archaeology, and abstract mathematics. They are
chameleons that fill the universe and hide in a microbe. Fortunately,
a century and a half of dedicated explorers from Jules Verne and H.G.
Wells through Michael Crichton, Gregory Benford, Carl Sagan, Douglas
Preston, and Lincoln Child have left behind field guides to these exotic
creatures. Oh, they exist all right, despite myths to the contrary.
You just have to know where to find them.
PREMISE
From downwind, the rank stench of a science thriller's premise should point you in the right direction. The premise is the outer scaffolding that dominates the thriller's characteristic appearance like an exoskeleton and may be the only clue a hunter has in excavating a buried science thriller. The premise must be surprising, profound, and tangible. Cool science perspires from its pores. A seasoned tracker will know that to procure an intact specimen, the only place to start is looking for a mind-bendingly original premise.
Cool science, the kind you see on the front page of Nature, is as hard to describe and easy to recognize as a Van Gogh. It changes foundational perspectives on topics with visceral, self-explanatory importance. It crosses established boundaries of academic departments like nuclear fallout. You may not know from where it spawned, although it is more likely to originate in nanotechnology or quantum physics than in dermatology or forestry. You just know it when it flares its nostrils and stares you down. And once you've spotted the premise, there are other clues to confirm your suspicions.
OCTANE
The first such clue is the shrapnel whizzing by your ear. Science thrillers are explosive, and the seeker is wise to approach cautiously from behind mounds of earth. Before you catch your prey, you can expect to climb out of lava-filled chasms, circumnavigate boiling oceans, and dodge everything from pernicious prions to approaching asteroids. It is not an occupation for the weak of stomach. This is a business where there is an assassin in every crowd and a frayed cable holding up every elevator.
PLAUSIBILITY
Hunting a science thriller cannot be a solitary pursuit. Plan on spending intense lunches with other geeks searching for clues. Beware that wherever these thrillers hide, they bring their clones.
Lots of clones. Specious imposters, like imitation DVD's in a flea market outside a Shanghai karaoke bar. You can't underestimate your chances of getting fooled, and you may not know until you wrassle it down and write it up. Then some astrophysicist at Berkley tells you this one can't be real because he's calculated the azimuth and your figures are way off; and some yahoo virologist at Cold Spring Harbor claims you could never express the sonic hedgehog gene with your enhancer because he's tried it; and a graduate student in algebraic topology at Princeton has the nerve to call and ask would you please take her name off the acknowledgments next printing because she's getting flak about your interpretation of Gõdel's theorem.
Rumor has it that in the old days none of this would have been a problem that a sage look and an ËIsn't that interesting,Ó and a wink to your editor couldn't finesse. But passing off a cubic zirconium as real in today's fiction market doesn't stop there. They organize sardine bars on Amazon for the sharks that come to devour and spit out your alleged thriller which Ëhasn't quite got the science right.Ó There are internet chat rooms where people spend obscene amounts of time to explain how you flubbed up. Soon come the demonstrations, and before you know it, you've started a war in Azerbaijan and your publisher cancels the next book.
It's not a science thriller if your science has holes big enough for the high-tech vehicles your characters drive. Right down to the color of the pipette tips and the way you connect your BNC cables in your laboratory, details matter. The trick is not to catch a thriller that is so fat with technical details that it loses its lithe, muscled form. When each detail counts, your thriller can operate within constraints of real science, but feed on just enough technical calories to make it lean, fierce, and terrifying.
So put on your Kevlar vest, your night-vision goggles, and bring along your wireless handheld to check your facts. It's going to be a wild ride, but when you've caught the scent of a live science thriller, don't lose it no matter how wide the jaws of hell open to swallow you up. It's the greatest rush of a lifetime, and worth every scar and parasite you acquire along the way.
2005 Jeffrey Anderson
Jeffrey Anderson received his MD and PhD degrees from Northwestern University . His research in neurobiology has appeared in SCIENCE, NATURE NEUROSCIENCE, and NEURON, among other scientific journals. He is a resident physician at the University of Utah in neuroradiology, actively pursuing research in functional MRI of the brain. His first novel, Sleeper Cell, debuts with Berkley Publishing Group in April 2005.
David Morrell on the classics of the thriller world

In a famous essay, Henry James once wrote, "The house of fiction has many windows." The same applies to thrillers. As we note on the home page of this website, there are many types: the legal thriller, the spy thriller, the action-adventure thriller, the medical thriller, etc. One of their common denominators is that they quicken the reader's heartbeat.
The following is a list of those we believe made a difference, compiled with the advice of several thriller reviewers. Books were chosen based on the impact that each had on the genre. Did the author contribute a new subject, direction, and/or technique that had a lasting effect? Did a work make such a impression that it has been frequently imitated? There will no doubt be objections about what was included and what wasn't. For that reason, please consider this a work in progress.
The list has a serious purpose. In "Tradition and the Individual Talent," T.S. Eliot insisted that every writer has an obligation to study the literary tradition in which that writer works. Eliot believed we have a responsibility to absorb and carry it forward, trying to add something of our own. Too often we pay attention only to current trends and lose the guidance that literary history can provide. Still, if we study our antecedents, we can strengthen our technical skills while using old concepts to go in new directions. At the least, we gain enough sophistication to know when we're innovating rather than performing the literary equivalent of reinventing the wheel.
One of the first things you'll notice is how inclusive the list is. Some of you might wonder why Bram Stoker's DRACULA is here, for example. Isn't that a horror novel? It certainly is. But if we change the paradigm, it is also a supernatural thriller. Indeed, if you remove the vampire element and think of Dracula as a serial killer, the novel becomes part of a tradition that leads directly to Thomas Harris's RED DRAGON and THE SILENCE OF THE LAMBS. Plus, DRACULA is palpably vivid with heart-pounding scenes and one of the finest extended chases ever written. Some of this excitement might energize you to outdo it. Other titles will perhaps raise eyebrows, too. For example, Joseph Wambaugh's THE ONION FIELD is non-fiction. But if you didn't know that it depicted actual events, you'd swear it was a novel. The purpose of the list is to encourage new ways of thinking and show the thriller as an evolving form.
Many of the authors on this list wrote numerous memorable books. We selected only one book for each author. Conrad's THE SECRET AGENT could have been substituted for his HEART OF DARKNESS. Ian Fleming's GOLDFINGER could have been selected in place of FROM RUSSIA WITH LOVE. Graham Greene's THIS GUN FOR HIRE or THE MINISTRY OF FEAR might have taken the place of THE THIRD MAN. John Le Carre's TINKER TAILOR SOLDIER SPY is as worthy of consideration as his breakthrough novel THE SPY WHO CAME IN FROM THE COLD. Robert Louis Stevenson's TREASURE ISLAND is as valid a candidate as his THE STRANGE CASE OF DR. JECKYLL AND MR. HYDE. When it comes to prolific writers of quality, mentally include your favorite title.
You'll note that there are far more male than female authors on the list. This imbalance is due to a publishing prejudice that for many years was a self-fulfilling prophecy. Editors felt that women couldn't convincingly dramatize sensational plots, although they were aware that a large percentage of fans were women. In turn, women avoided writing in the field because they couldn't overcome the bigotry. Helen MacInnes and Patricia Highsmith were two of the few who managed to survive and flourish despite this repressive environment. Both began publishing in the 1940s.
Only decades later did a new group of women finally make their marks and find stable homes in the field. In 1988, the publication of Katherine Neville's THE EIGHT was a gale-force breath of fresh air. Part swashbuckler, part intellectual feast, the novel rightfully became a cult classic, its puzzle-solving plot innovations making it the antecedent to THE DA VINCI CODE.
For the next seven years, trend-establishing women were again absent. Finally in 1995, Tami Hoag made the remarkable jump from being the bestselling star of Bantam's Loveswept series into suspense thrillers with NIGHT SINS. The book exploded onto bestseller charts, proving not only that a romance author could write a compelling suspense nail-biter, but that she could also carry her large audience of readers with her. Still, those who had never written romance remained shut out. That literary glass ceiling was shattered at last by Gayle Lynds, who debuted in 1996 with MASQUERADE, a post-Cold-War novel that integrated the contrasting traditions of Le Carré and Ludlum while its minimalist style added a modern slant.
Where to begin this must-read list? Historically, Wilkie Collins is credited with inventing "the novel of sensation” when he wrote THE WOMAN IN WHITE in1860. But obvious sensational works predate him. Poe seemed a good place to start. It's amusing to consider that the creator of the mystery story also created the thriller.
Where to end? With an obvious exception like Dan Brown's phenomenally successful (and controversial) THE DA VINCI CODE, it's impossible to assess the impact of any recent thriller, however much we admire them. Not enough time has passed. We don't have the perspective necessary to determine what is influential and what isn't. To prevent this list from becoming a mere reflection of current taste, we chose 1995, a decade ago, as an arbitrary cut-off date. Soon we'll add a second list — great contemporary thrillers that are also must-reads, but chosen according to different criteria. To get a sense of the authors who will be included, go to Steve Berry's excellent essay, "The International Thriller Lives Again,” posted in "The Thriller World” section of this website.
We encourage you to suggest inclusions and omissions to both endeavors. But consider whether the writer you nominate made a difference in the genre and does indeed write thrillers and not mysteries. For a definition, please check "What Is a Thriller?” on this website's home page.
Granted, some of the works we list no longer thrill as effectively as they once did. Tastes change. What excited one generation may seem tame to another. But in the context of their culture, they delivered the goods and made their mark. That is why we recommend that you investigate these titles in the order in which they were written. Consider each as part of a developing tradition in a lively discussion that we hope will make us more informed as well as better authors and readers. Some of the titles have been annotated. Eventually, all will have brief descriptions.
1. Edgar Allan Poe, The Narrative of Arthur Gordon Pym, 1838
Poe's only novel dramatizes harrowing episodes on a mysterious voyage to the South Pole. As in "The Fall of the House of Usher,” extreme sensations dominate. A chilling, enigmatic work by an author whose influence is incalculable.
2. Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo, 1845
None of the movie versions communicates the excitement and epic scope of this novel. The extended prison sequence culminates with a literally breath-taking watery escape in a shroud. A revenge thriller with chases, assumed identities, and discovered treasure. A masterwork.
3. Wilkie Collins, The Woman in White, 1860
Although Poe came first, Collins received the credit for inventing the "novel of sensation.” The title character is an apparition that appears on a lonely country road. Intrigue ensues, much of it involving switched identities (a phobia in the rigid class structure of Victorian society). Filmed twice. While the book's sensationalism has become dated, its influence persists as is evident when its villain, Count Fosco, appears as a contemporary character in Brimstone, a 2004 thriller by Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child.
4. H. Rider Haggard, King Soloman's Mines, 1885
5. Robert Louis Stevenson, The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde, 1886
6. Oscar Wilde, The Picture of Dorian Gray, 1891
7. Bram Stoker, Dracula,1897
As with The Count of Monte Cristo, some readers assume they know Dracula because they've seen numerous film versions, but no movie does justice to this compelling, complex narrative. Led by archetypal Dr. Van Helsing, a terrified group of friends uses modern science (in the form of the telephone, the telegraph, the typewriter, and blood transfusions, etc.) to combat ancient superstition. Technically interesting because of its sequence of epistolary first persons, this masterwork has an epic scope. Another masterwork.
8. Rudyard Kipling, Kim, 1901
9. Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness, 1902
Conrad's alter-ego Marlowe joins an expedition to the heart of the Congo in search of a mysterious man named Kurtz. This first-person-within-a-first-person narrative exposes increasing atrocities as the heart of the human soul is exposed. "The horror, the horror.” Meaningful as well as gripping, it was filmed as Apocalypse Now.
10. Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, The Hound of the Baskervilles, 1902
Few plots have achieved the iconic status that this one enjoys. Most of the Holmes short stories are calm and intellectual. But in this novel (one of Doyle's four), he explored highly charged, emotionally gothic territory, which is why we consider it a thriller as much as a mystery. The book's first-person narrative is revealing as Watson strains to maintain his physician's objective pose while describing Holmes's confrontation with evil.
11. Erskine Childers, The Riddle of the Sands, 1903
A British yachtsman discovers a German plot to invade England. The "sands” of the title are beaches on the Baltic Sea that are exposed at low tide. One of the seminal outdoor espionage tales. Major influence on Geoffrey Household. Marvelous local color and authentic yachting
information.
12. Edgar Rice Burroughs, Tarzan of the Apes, 1912
13. Marie Belloc Lowndes, The Lodger, 1913
The first novel about Jack the Ripper. Filmed by Alfred Hitchcock and seminal in his work (thus seminal to thriller movies), it is an Edwardian example of the Victorian sensationalist movement begun by Wilkie Collins. Its suspense was considered extremely gore-ridden for its time.
14. John Buchan, The 39 Steps, 1915
15. Rafael Sabatini, Scaramouche , 1921
16. Richard Connell, "The Most Dangerous Game,” 1924
17. W. Somerset Maugham, Ashenden, or The Secret Agent, 1928
18. James M. Cain, The Postman Always Rings Twice, 1934
19. Eric Ambler, A Coffin for Dimitrios, 1939
20. Geoffrey Household, Rogue Male, 1939
A British big-game hunter stalks Hitler on the eve of World War II. Household is one of the masters of the outdoor hunter-hunted genre. Mystical approach to nature. His other great works are Watcher in the Shadows, The Courtesy of Death, and The Dance of the Dwarfs.
21.Helen MacInnes, Above Suspicion, 1941
22. Cornell Woolrich, The Night Has a Thousand Eyes, 1945
23. Kenneth Fearing, The Big Clock, 1946
Inspired two films, one with Ray Milland, the other with Kevin Costner (retitled No Way Out). Its central gigantic-clock image earned it a solid reputation as a new approach to a ticking-time story. Indeed, the clock becomes an elaborate, philosophical metaphor. With similar innovation, Fearing tells the story in a sequence of separate first-person narrators. An example of the kinds of thematic and stylistic challenges we welcome.
24. Graham Greene, The Third Man, 1950
25. Patricia Highsmith, Strangers on a Train, 1950
26. Jim Thompson, The Killer Inside Me, 1952
27. Daphne du Maurier, "The Birds,” 1952
28. Hammond Innes, Campbell's Kingdom, 1952
29. Jack Finney, The Invasion of the Body Snatchers, 1954
30. Ian Fleming, From Russia with Love, 1957
31. Richard Condon, The Manchurian Candidate, 1959
32. Len Deighton, The Ipcress File, 1962
33. Fletcher Knebel and Charles W. Bailey, Seven Days in May, 1962
34. John le Carre, The Spy Who Came in from the Cold, 1963
35. Alistair MacLean, Ice Station Zebra, 1963
36. Adam Hall, The Quiller Memorandum, 1965
37. Michael Crichton, The Andromeda Strain, 1969
38. James Dickey, Deliverance, 1970
39. Frederick Forsyth, The Day of the Jackal, 1971
40. Brian Garfield, Death Wish, 1972
41. David Morrell, First Blood, 1972
42. Trevanian, The Eiger Sanction, 1972
43. Joseph Wambaugh, The Onion Field, 1973
44. Peter Benchley, Jaws, 1974
45. William Goldman, Marathon Man, 1974
46. James Grady, Six Days of the Condor, 1974
47. Robert Stone, Dog Soldiers, 1974
48. Jack Higgins, The Eagle Has Landed, 1975
49. Clive Cussler, Raise the Titanic!, 1976
50. Ira Levin, The Boys from Brazil, 1976
51. Anne Rice, Interview with the Vampire, 1976
A ground-breaking supernatural thriller, powerful and original. Overwhelmed by personal tragedy, an 18th-century Lousiana plantation owner is turned into a vampire and lives to the present. This book created a tsunami of imitators as well as Rice's own Vampire Chronicles. T he epic story is told across three centuries and two continents, rich in detail (particularly the New Orleans sections), textured with historical, cultural, and literary references. In essence, it probes the complex nature of the human soul.
52. Robin Cook, Coma, 1977
53. Ken Follett, The Eye of the Needle, 1978
54. Stephen King, The Dead Zone, 1979
55. John D. MacDonald, The Green Ripper, 1979
56. Robert Ludlum, The Bourne Identity, 1980
57. Eric Van Lustbader, The Ninja, 1980
58. Thomas Harris, Red Dragon 1981
59. Tom Clancy, The Hunt for Red October,1984
60. Dale Brown, Flight of the Old Dog, 1987
61. Nelson DeMille, The Charm School,1988
62. Dean Koontz, Watchers, 1988
63. Katherine Neville, The Eight, 1988
Set in 1972 and 1790, two parallel stories — one about a young French nun, the other following an American computer expert — weave across time and continents, focusing on a missing chess set reputedly once owned by Charlemagne and endowed with remarkable powers. This genre-expanding novel is smart, exciting, and original, full of cultural and historical references, mysticism, politics, espionage, murder, and breathless high adventure. A cult book rightfully never out of print.
64. John Grisham, The Firm, 1991
65. James Patterson, Along Came a Spider, 1992
The kidnapping of two children at an elite private school sets this pulsing tale into motion. With impeccable timing, Patterson never releases the tension, instead tightening the suspense with each short chapter, with each surprise, each new twist. The psychotic villain is unusual, the stuff of nightmares, yet tied like a hangman's knot into today's violent culture — the villain's goal is to be even more infamous than the kidnapper of the Lindbergh baby. Relevant and chillingly intelligent.
66. Stephen Hunter, Point of Impact, 1993
67. Caleb Carr, The Alienist, 1994
68. John Lescroart, The Thirteenth Juror, 1994
Smooth as a stiletto, lyrically written, populated by compelling moral questions. Lescroart proved an author does not have to be an attorney to create riveting and authentic legal thrillers. Because of the novel's vast popularity, "the thirteenth juror" — law-office jargon for a trial judge — entered the public's vocabulary.
69. Tami Hoag, Night Sins, 1995
70. David Baldacci, Absolute Power, 1995


